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Intoxicated vs OpTiMuS
10 bars
blind spit no bullshit votes... OpTiMuS kicks it off... |
ten~lines~in~mind~then~minds~collide~with~eyes~sup ries~with~rhymes~times this line~bye~nine an watch it rip ur~spine like im jack~da~eihn~stine
fine ill drop coz u You dropin a verse that so~slow ,like watchin a Midget Phillipino~Grow..(ha ha)I could read all ur lines with tears in my eyes, and still see~no~Flow He's Starting To Develop Amnesia, From The 1's I Get And The 0's He Recieves...Like Binary, He Cant Combine A Lesser Molecule, Like + And - He'll Never = Me... (think about it)no sequal~g tell u wat ill ko ur ass this time an in a months time u can recall~me (lol) wathin u slide~an~peep u cant win at this game coz u like sadam husain playin hide~an~seek (lol) u just get fucked like u ride~da~meet Make~Tides~Quake, your bent, twisted, crooked... point is your Just~Not~Straight~Can't~Escape... your spits couldn't "serve" rip if you Testified~On~Platesso fuck u an the rest~of~ur~mates Choke~Ya~Set Demote~Ya~Net intox vocals get "carried away" like he "Eloped~Wit~Necks"Dope??~Ya~Bet.. Blow~Ya~Set its like "bankruptin animal hospitals" tha way I "Broke~This~Vet(GAME OVER HA HA HA) |
haha i'll prolly post tonight... had i ruff night last night.....
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The thing is... i'm smokin YOU, yet im bad for your health/
your verse was funny... but the only person who laughed was yourself/ ** wack emcee... I'll smash ya bones to dust ... sprinkle it on my weed and then smoke a blunt/ roast you up...consider me a drug dealer... i'll stab u in the back cuz i dont go for fronts/ I know you aint an architect... jus look at that structure n format/ I'll puncture ya thorax... smash thru ya ribs n into ya lungs wit a war-axe/ get it together... ya words are broken up more than highschool couples/ Optimus rap?? he'd be better in 'pop'... like his 'rhymes were bubbles'/ whatll u find in the rubble?? Op couldnt dig for ideas if his mind was a shovel/ He had to find himself trouble, but i can see wackness anywhere ... like my eyes are the hubble/ even tho alotta ya lines, been 'round longer than some bottles of wine... It's still not as bad as naming yourself after a cartoon called Optimus Prime/ I'll end it there... VOTE PLEASE |
lets get some votes please.......................................
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Intoxicated got this one. His punches were better and hit harder9not by much though). His personals were no contest. Optimus didn't really have many good personals and he had to explain to much, plus his format was hella off. They both had some run ons but Intoxicated came harder.
VOTE_INTOXICATED http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109803 |
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OPT got damn!! work on the structure dawg u threw hella mutlis' into a bunch of rhymin BS and then had a couple punches near the end that were aight. intoxicated not a bad spit, had a couple good punches that hit harder, and the structure and flow was better and more understandable..vote-intoxicated
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#4..... Please Vote!!!........................................... .....
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Creativity - Optimus
Punches - eh..Opt Personals - Intox Flow - Intox Wordplay - Opt Meta's - Intox..opt had more similes:) Multi's - None Complexity - Opt Vote- Opt in my view came wit harder punches http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110008 ^hit that up |
Can someone please take a few minutes of there time to vote?? PLease?? I can return the favor soon, i almost have a 100 posts...
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Optimus your verse had some punches that werent really hard hittin, but the thing that really makes it hard too read, and find your punches was all those ~ things. Dawg we understand Multi's you dont have to point it out. Change ya structure too, make it more like intox's, but even up the lines like : .................
..................... ................. ..................... Feel me? Intox you had some punches that were harder hittin then Opt's, plus you had better flow, structure, opener and closer. My vote goes to intox. Vote - Intoxicated If you could return an honest vote Id appreciate that. Thanks vv Me vs. pictureperfect2 vv http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109706 |
ho ho ho... uppin for some mafuckin votes,,,,,,,,,,,,
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come vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111229 |
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