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Dieing In Your Arms
Title: Dieing In Your Arms
Producer: Pharello Productions Artists: Verse1: Mufyn Verse2: Quest Verse3: Me (BLooDSHoTT) Im only on the 3rd verse no where else ... holla tell me what you think .. www.soundclick.com/bloodshott |
ok intro sounds...weird...
1st verse is ok...rhymes not that great...flow is off a little bit at certain parts...no overdubs...they'd help it alot... 2nd verse is kinda monotone....sounds like fabolous with less emotion...no overdubs again...man overdubs are great, they can make an emotionless verse like this sound 10 times better...I like the way each verse ends the same ok song gets all weird...ok a good beat kicking in...lol seems like bloodshott realized he was the only one that was gonna rip the track so he needed a diffrentbeat to rap on....overdubs would help this verse too, but it atleast has good delivery... overall a pretty good track....Bloodshots part ripped it tho...the beat and everything on that verse was sicc..... 7.0 tho..for lack of emotion by the other 2 kats... peace |
.. word good looks .. uppin ...
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.. i didnt wanna overdub .. cause i got mad mixdowns .. i dont think my cool edit couldve handled it ..
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.. uppin ..
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what up cuzz
track is straight first two need a lil more emotion..lyrics were tight though 3rd cat when the beat switched ripped it up good shit where y'all from in Jersey? i'm in the Brick City holla bak |
lol @ cool edit not handling it...i didn't think anyone else had that problem....oh well still a nice piece
hit me up on aim...SinThesis187 that's my yahoo name too.... peace |
ya flow has always been off a bit...jus a couple times a song...but anyways, intro is wierd, ya need overdubs, ya to montone sounding.
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.. dats prob cuz .. i aint mix it .. i juss send da accapella .. good looks though ...
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