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My Philosophy
open your eyes and go blind so you can understand that in the snow, signs can be as hard to see as land on pirate ships or flying saucers, or within me the only thing that I've determined is that I love Sophy . .. ... She's everything you can imagine but won't out of fear everything thats great and tragic in the eyes of a seer like the eyes in the rear of a first grade teacher's head that peer and comprehend and choose to ignore instead looking back, staring forth, or fifth or sixth or seventh cause the numbers are unending in a premature heaven that you're immersed in, submerged in all thats harmony secluding yourself, or shooting yourself in the arm to see if the pain is actually, sort of like a pinch but escalated wake up from the dream to find you're actually sedated and realise that Sophy has gotten really out of hand even though you love her, you have to admit she's mad ... .. . and the barren waste land that ensued left me bereft when all I cared about was gone, what was there? death? but that would let her win, destroying what was left of me but what am I supposed to do without my philoSophy? |
nice peice
very good flow and it was very consistant, and nice concept. drop a vote please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108195 |
Damn. . I See You N Skiddz Are Having A Little Comp. . And I Must Say You Edged Him By Just The Content. . The Story Told. . As Small As It Was. . Was Very Dope. . Loved How You Played On The Name And Said You Loved Sophy. . Maven Is A Philosophy Fucker. . Heh. . Content Was Dope. . Vocab Was Great. . Multi's Were Good When Present. . Everything Just Meshed. . And This Piece Turned Out Ill . . Great Work Man. . Pz.
that you're immersed in, submerged in all thats harmony secluding yourself, or shooting yourself in the arm to see if the pain is actually, sort of like a pinch but escalated wake up from the dream to find you're actually sedated and realise that Sophy has gotten really out of hand even though you love her, you have to admit she's mad ^ ^ ^ DOPE Part. . Trust. . Highly Ill. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109230 Feedback Appreciated. |
i thought the way you worded it was good, it seemed to fall into place necely, the scheme wasnt to elaborate, but was carried well... yeah a good well thought out drop... but why da you guys center ya verses,,,,.... return the favour... for a change....
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yeah...topical battle on rm thanks for the feed, I'll definitely hit your piece. |
You Slut!!
Dammit!!!!!! Just when I think I CAN win, here you come dropping these amazing pieces...Damnit!!! But nonetheless, Good drop Your flow was very good, The ending was dope, I'd never even think of the name inside the word. Many nice lines added to the imagery of the piece, Much useful vocabulary to add to the effect of the words. Dope piece. |
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