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dilousion412 01-23-04 05:45 PM

new 412 song
 
Verse 1: DIlousion
Ima hustle your money
Ima pimp your honey
And if you wanna confront me
You’ll have a hunted knee
And a bruised kidney
Everything will be blurry
Cuz ill give you a concussion
Shouldn’t of started fussin
Cuz your not remeberin nuthin
It wasn’t even good hustllin
Bitch you shoulda knew sumthin
but
See In hustling I win
Me and all of my kin
Are money makin
til the last day we awakin
Levin you shakin
Leavin ur pops bakin
Cuz we was love makin
And he walked on in
So now im run-nun- in
oh


Verse 2 Dilousion
You’re a bed wetter
And a really bad dresser
I mean my grandma god bless her
Even dressed a lot better
That’s why your girl left ya
And im hear to pimp ha
And I fit ha and it gets to ya
I mean I accually give her things
Not cheap plastic earings
To spicy chicken wings
And a phone that don’t ring
And I give her real gold
Not ice that’s cold
Give her a bed that don’t fold
And things to later be sold
To still own your house hold
Now listen to what ur told
Don’t come at me you damn fool
Now How many times do you have to be told

Verse 3 Controversy
I NO WE GOT YALL SHOOK AND READY TO SCREAM
WE GOT THE WHOLE TOWN SHOOK WHEN WE BE DOIN A GANGSTA LEAN
MAKIN NOT ENOUGH GREEN
TO BE SEEN
RIGHTLY BY THE PUBLIC EYE
FUCK IT, THE PUBLIC EYE WILL DIE
AND FRIE
GETTING THEY ASSES WHIPPED
ERY ONE HURT WHEN I GOT MY CAP TO THE BACK AND MY 9 IN MY GANGSTA GRIP
LIKE YO CONTRO SLOW DOWN ON THE GANGSTA SHIT
U SO COOL HOW DO U FLOW THAT SICK
COME BACK TO THE HOOD HEARIN AYO AYO
GO INTO UR'S AND IM HERIN GAO GAO
SO THEN I JUST GOT TO GO
WHEN I SEE THE CORNER BITCHES ARE ALL GAP TEETH HOS
UR LIFE WILL SOON FADE AWAY
GONE FOREVER
WHEN U MEET MY BLADE
ITS NOW OR NEVER
U GOT A CHANCE TO RUN
OR U GOT A CHANCE TO FIGHT
EITHER ONE U CHOOSE
YOU ARE DYING TONIGHT
THAT IS RIGHT
CAP U IN THE HEART
LEAVE U HUGGIN THE STREETS
THIS IS JUST THE START
OF WHAT ITS GON' BE
WHAT ITS GON' MEAN
U TELL ME
HOW U WANT IT TO GO DOWN
BUT UR OPINION DON'T COUNT
SO ITS U THAT BE GOIN DOWN
AND ME THAT GOIN DOWNTOWN
AND THEN ILL DIE BUT RESSURECT CUZ I AINT HELLBOUND
I GUESS ILL SEE U AROUND
HOW DOES THIS PLAN SOUND?

No chorus yet it aint finished

dilousion412 01-24-04 11:58 AM

wow stuff gets pushed down fast on this site
someone read

Penskills 01-24-04 12:48 PM

..What the fuck was this..another garbage..cramping up the page...

Razer 01-24-04 12:50 PM

.....gangsta wannabe

Menik 01-24-04 11:57 PM

Well this wasnt that good.....try working on different content in your pieces....it flowed decent i thought.....also lose the caps in the third verse....but just keep elevating and you will get there....and keep at it man.

dilousion412 01-25-04 01:37 PM

hey razer ur from fuckin londen so shut the fuck up about whats ganksta you just fuckin joined the boards so dont talk shit unless you have a reputation to back ur self up on :cussing: :thefinger


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