Armenian Genocide
 

A BORN LEADA
REPRESENTIN ARMENIANS NIGGAZ
A LOST BROKE TRIBE NOW WE DEALAZ
GOD HELP US PLEASE
PROVE THESE NIGGAZ WE HAD ENEMIES
1 9 1 5
TELL EM WHAT WE SEEN
IMA TURK KILLA FUCK THE NAZIS TOO
YEA U NO THIS SHIT IZ TRUE
HEY TURKZ ITS ONE THING 2 FAKE 1 DEATH BUT 1.5 MILL
NA I WENT CHILL
IM GONNA KEEP FIGHTIN N WRITIN
U POLITICAL CATZ CAN STOP DEBATIN AND RATIN
CUZ THE TRUTH IZ TOLD
WE WUZ BROKE LIVIN IN THE COLD
TYME FOR THA TURKZ 2 SPILL THE BEANS N RICE
YEA INO IM NICE
ROLL THE DICE
HIT SNAKE EYEZ
THESE ARENT NO LIEZ
LOOKIN THE MIRRAZ
SEEN DEAD NIGGAZ
ARMENIANZ BEEIN SHOT N TORTURED
HAVE U HEARD
THE WORD
GENOCIDE
ITS WESTSIDE
THATS WE RIDE
THE 619 213
NOW FREE
BUT WE STILL RUNNIN FROM THE POLICE
GOT MA M4 ON LEASE
WE WELL NEVA HAVE PEACE
REST IN PEACE 2 MY COMRADES 1915 WESTSIDE OUTLAW
:nono:
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yo that was aight...need a bit more of a flow and structure ya know?
a bit simple too...but keep at it son....

thx bro its my first eva

This was alright.....just lose the CAPS in the piece though, kinda hurts the eyes a bit or it just might be from being late lol...structure needs some work though, try to even the lines out a bit though man to help the structure out a lot....vocab was ok.....try adding some multies to this though to make it better....the flow in this was alright....but for your first piece it was ok...keep elevating and keep at it man :)