just a quick topical keystyle
 

True friends trouble no one…just help one another…
Like brothers…there’s no other in the world you would rather be with…
Perceive this…no one else would rather believe it…
Because a true friend takes the pain and is grateful to receive it…
We need it…depression overwhelms the feeble…
True friends are 1 in a million…rising from ordinary people…
Extraordinary to lead you…when phony’s try to deceive you…
Realize we need you…to make deception see through…
Perception is unequaled…true friends never leave you…
Though trials and tribulations…
Intimidation and frustration…
Smiles through bad relations…
Miles of procrastination…
A true friend remains the same…never thinks to complain…
When things drive them insane…emotions are trained to refrain…
All the pictures of the brain…contorted visions of shame…
From the first breath from the lips… to first kiss in the rain…
Shielding from the pain…the healing to keep you sane….
Mentally inclined to revert to Darwin’s theory to maintain…
Defending you from the lies…wipe tears from your eyes…
Reverting failed attempts to bittersweet tries..
True friends never fail…Afore mentioning “True”..
Fakes make mistakes…which make glad to have friends like you…

feedback anyone?

You've deffinately got a different style... seemed like a cross between poetry and emotional rap, you chose a good subject matter to cover... It could of been a lot better if you were a bit more descriptive in your bars and chose a few different issues to cover within tha subject... Overall it was a pretty decent keystyle...

- 1d

thx for feeedback...more?

some more feedback people? any1?

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