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Accelerate 01-24-04 12:00 PM

10 Lines Sitting in my Mind
 
Money buys Power, Givin People Respect
Never Found my Footing, Just A Misstep
Destruction Shows, Jesus Comes to Lay the Law
Because When He Walks...Its San Andrea's Fault
I'm Confused over My Sudden Thoughts, Clearly
But I Really can't Stand The True Lies Near Me
Make Me Sit Down, Bear the Pain, Grit My Teeth
We Have wannabe Gangsta's, trying to Be Unique
Twins Stood together, Two Others Made 'Em Fall
It Showed the Voice of America,
Desperation was Our Call

Dev 01-24-04 12:18 PM

i quite liked this, short, but compact... it had a nice flow going and was to the point... would have been better if it was a bit longer, but still.. nice..... what more can i say....

Accelerate 01-24-04 12:19 PM

Thank You, Sir

Penskills 01-24-04 12:39 PM

..short and sweet~~message was delivered with impact..very good flow..could've been a great piece if longer?..it's still a joyful read..(skiddz threaten to kill me....)


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