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menolin 01-24-04 07:11 PM

NyZ GrIncH (dynasty soldiers) V.S double-0 seven (voice of the dtreetz)
 
aiight!!
10-14 lines!!
1 hour time limit!!
no crew votes,
no d/ votes,
no 1 lne vote,
no un-explained votes,
and any more i forgot to add!!!



BLIND SPITS.

NyZ GrIncH 01-24-04 07:22 PM

dis is mah chekkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

Thread cleaned, now stop freeposting. -Token

NyZ GrIncH 01-24-04 07:54 PM

Well if u dont know 007 let me intrduce him to you,He's in the crew with dikk ridin prewritters,In battles they'll kick u in da nuts wen u aint lookin and consider dem selves true fighters...

Dis bitch is a member of Slutz of Tha Streetz,but they dont get the message and still stay on da corner,In the promise land i'll still merk ur assand make u look like a foreigner,Its a shame cuz his rappin careers over and I dont see a single mourner....

The only punch he ever landed on a kid was in pre-k wen dis slut recited a nusery rhyme,The way im beatin up on Voice of daStreetz u'd swear it was an organized crime

I'm a maniac and on a killin spree add another to the list cuz i just got rid of dis emcee,
Reighn-Man was number one,dis bitch is number two,and if i stay on dis spree
mc aines ur ass is about to be number three,and after i spit mah closer imma win cuz dats a guarantee cuz i aint losin to one of Voices wackiest pussies...

Im about to end dis shyt,but im not good with hellos or goodbyes,Take dis for advice slut...movies are out classed...in real life 007 dies...

menolin 01-24-04 07:55 PM

A oh so ever revealin' sig..or the reversed theory of what it states*
Now if wackness has nephews&neices u must be it's sibling & soulmate,
Never will this kid match me, be next to or alike me against all odds
Want to compare urself to me?.......................start with these dots
Got my AIM hidden solely for ppl like you, kid ur just a newbie & weak
Your the main factor every dope head switches AIM's 5 times a week
this guy thinks he's real heartless, were you think he got his second name,
a green cartoon character, these 15 year old kids never change,
Ok now as a final conclusion i will exclude a punch..its done i've done it,
I'm not talkin about this battle tho, cause it never started to begin with,


*in his sig it says, 'fuck dickriders', think about the punch!!

NyZ GrIncH 01-24-04 07:58 PM

uppin #1...........................................<----yo bitch how u like dese dotz??

Straight Ace 01-24-04 08:12 PM

NyZ GrIncH
Well if u dont know 007 let me intrduce him to you,He's in the crew with dikk ridin prewritters,In battles they'll kick u in da nuts wen u aint lookin and consider dem selves true fighters...
Switch up ur structure..Bad opener

Dis bitch is a member of Slutz of Tha Streetz,but they dont get the message and still stay on da corner,In the promise land i'll still merk ur assand make u look like a foreigner,Its a shame cuz his rappin careers over and I dont see a single mourner....
..Stretched. No real punch..herb

The only punch he ever landed on a kid was in pre-k wen dis slut recited a nusery rhyme,The way im beatin up on Voice of daStreetz u'd swear it was an organized crime
..Makes u look less then a idiot..Good for you!

I'm a maniac and on a killin spree add another to the list cuz i just got rid of dis emcee,
Reighn-Man was number one,dis bitch is number two,and if i stay on dis spree
mc aines ur ass is about to be number three,and after i spit mah closer imma win cuz dats a guarantee cuz i aint losin to one of Voices wackiest pussies...
Like i said, switch ur style up...stretched & no punch

Im about to end dis shyt,but im not good with hellos or goodbyes,Take dis for advice slut...movies are out classed...in real life 007 dies...
This was actually 'ok'.. better then the rest of ur verse

Double-0 Seven
A oh so ever revealin' sig..or the reversed theory of what it states*
Now if wackness has nephews&neices u must be it's sibling & soulmate,
..Ok..nothin great
Never will this kid match me, be next to or alike me against all odds
Want to compare urself to me?.......................start with these dots
Played..
Got my AIM hidden solely for ppl like you, kid ur just a newbie & weak
Your the main factor every dope head switches AIM's 5 times a week
This was nice, creative..ok punch
this guy thinks he's real heartless, were you think he got his second name,
a green cartoon character, these 15 year old kids never change,
Ok play on his name..
Ok now as a final conclusion i will exclude a punch..its done i've done it,
I'm not talkin about this battle tho, cause it never started to begin with,
Ok, ok..nice for a closer

I think it's pretty obvious 007 takes it.
Far more complex, creative & wittier verse..
Nothin great, but alot better then Grinch.
..vote Double-0 Seven

menolin 01-24-04 10:33 PM

first time uppin...........................

BaNE 01-24-04 11:25 PM

flow/structure-007, every single line in nyz's verse was stretched
punches/wordplay-007, nyz didnt have any, but that line about the neices and nephews from 007 got a smile out of me
disses/personals-nyz... his very last line was aight
multis-none

vote-007

hit this up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109037 (honestly plz)

menolin 01-25-04 08:41 AM

2cnd time uppin............................

Conversion 01-25-04 09:15 AM

punches.....0007 hit harder........structure....007....nvz fix ya structure....
personals - 0007......flow....both....basically 007 wins cuz he had better punches and metas....nyz did ok.....needs a better rhyme scheme and definitley a new strucutre....
vote-007

menolin 01-25-04 01:56 PM

3rd time

NyZ GrIncH 01-25-04 02:38 PM

lol dont you love dese dick ridin votes???????^^^^^ mods please take care of dis crap...............

Virtuoso 01-25-04 03:06 PM

Quote:
NyZ GrIncH
Well if u dont know 007 let me intrduce him to you,He's in the crew with dikk ridin prewritters,In battles they'll kick u in da nuts wen u aint lookin and consider dem selves true fighters...
Switch up ur structure..Bad opener

Dis bitch is a member of Slutz of Tha Streetz,but they dont get the message and still stay on da corner,In the promise land i'll still merk ur assand make u look like a foreigner,Its a shame cuz his rappin careers over and I dont see a single mourner....
..Stretched. No real punch..herb

The only punch he ever landed on a kid was in pre-k wen dis slut recited a nusery rhyme,The way im beatin up on Voice of daStreetz u'd swear it was an organized crime
..Makes u look less then a idiot..Good for you!

I'm a maniac and on a killin spree add another to the list cuz i just got rid of dis emcee,
Reighn-Man was number one,dis bitch is number two,and if i stay on dis spree
mc aines ur ass is about to be number three,and after i spit mah closer imma win cuz dats a guarantee cuz i aint losin to one of Voices wackiest pussies...
Like i said, switch ur style up...stretched & no punch

Im about to end dis shyt,but im not good with hellos or goodbyes,Take dis for advice slut...movies are out classed...in real life 007 dies...
This was actually 'ok'.. better then the rest of ur verse

Double-0 Seven
A oh so ever revealin' sig..or the reversed theory of what it states*
Now if wackness has nephews&neices u must be it's sibling & soulmate,
..Ok..nothin great
Never will this kid match me, be next to or alike me against all odds
Want to compare urself to me?.......................start with these dots
Played..
Got my AIM hidden solely for ppl like you, kid ur just a newbie & weak
Your the main factor every dope head switches AIM's 5 times a week
This was nice, creative..ok punch
this guy thinks he's real heartless, were you think he got his second name,
a green cartoon character, these 15 year old kids never change,
Ok play on his name..
Ok now as a final conclusion i will exclude a punch..its done i've done it,
I'm not talkin about this battle tho, cause it never started to begin with,
Ok, ok..nice for a closer

I think it's pretty obvious 007 takes it.
Far more complex, creative & wittier verse..
Nothin great, but alot better then Grinch.
..vote Double-0 Seven


yea 007 had a more personal....... an harder hitting puches........ Grinch...like wrote paragraphs.......his bars were different lengths..........confusing to read an shit......
^^^ i quote ACE...... i feel the same

The Jett 01-25-04 05:58 PM

^^what kind of vote is this?...u cant quote things..

...Àû†øpšÿ... 01-25-04 06:21 PM

This Was A Nice Battle ut Ima Hve To Go Wit 007 He Had An Overall Better Verse Especially With The Punches,Personals/Disses/Wordplay Etc...

Vote=007

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