Word Definate Vs. Lirael One
 

10 lines max/min
No hate votes
No cres votes
No dickride votes
You drop first...gl :thumbup:

Its venom this Vet Spits, and your my Next Bitch ..
cause the only people ..
.. that have Trouble with Word's, are Dyslexic's!
Dont try to Hollar Kid,
i'll pop ya Collar Lid ..
cause your whole Career's in Ruins .. like an Archaeologist!
Why Bother to Spit?!
Its obvious your getting blasted,
Saying goes 'Like Father like Son' ..
.. so im guessing your an overweight, unemployed bastard!
Wont even Blink a Sweat,
as i Sink this 'Vet' ..
..and leave Word's Running .. like the fucking Ink was Wet!

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Ill leave your head spinning like a spiders abdomen,
no one feels you, a plaster mold wont even adapt to him
He could be in the bible with a brother named Cane, n still wouldn't be Able,
cuz Lirael couldnt rock the mic with a babys craddle
Lirael One n Jacent, a crew of two pigs in a blanket,
n both couldn't outplay me with a radiostation
Both wear Nike when they fuck each other, no interruptions, they "Just Do It",
This wack kid is fucking garbage, like sex with raw sewage
His structure is outdated like old buildings, a thing of the past,
but maybe he could rap...before stella got her groove back

:thefinger

Lol at your played lines .. woah. Anyways ..


Votes?!

I like both of these........very hard to decide.......good punches back an forth........to me this is a coin toss............i had to read twice to decide but vote goes to WORD....because of the choice of words plus he had some pretty interesting lines.....Cane an Able line was ill.........Peace Hit any of my Open Mic's Up thanks....Lirael you was good to man.....sorry i cant vote on both........peace

uppin for votes...

Lirael

Its venom this Vet Spits, and your my Next Bitch ..
cause the only people ..
.. that have Trouble with Word's, are Dyslexic's!
Not a bad opening
Dont try to Hollar Kid,
i'll pop ya Collar Lid ..
cause your whole Career's in Ruins .. like an Archaeologist!
Played.. i spit that shit myself back when i was a newbie
Why Bother to Spit?!
Its obvious your getting blasted,
Saying goes 'Like Father like Son' ..
.. so im guessing your an overweight, unemployed bastard!
ya struct is fucked... dont know which lines go wit which
Wont even Blink a Sweat,
as i Sink this 'Vet' ..
..and leave Word's Running .. like the fucking Ink was Wet!
Herd that shit before too.. played

Overall - Ya struct is fucked.... you must see people drop like this but your doin it all wrong...at the end of my post ill show you how ya verse should'a looked


Word

Ill leave your head spinning like a spiders abdomen,
no one feels you, a plaster mold wont even adapt to him
Ok opening
He could be in the bible with a brother named Cane, n still wouldn't be Able,
cuz Lirael couldnt rock the mic with a babys craddle
Played...
Lirael One n Jacent, a crew of two pigs in a blanket,
n both couldn't outplay me with a radiostation
Not so good.. played again
Both wear Nike when they fuck each other, no interruptions, they "Just Do It",
This wack kid is fucking garbage, like sex with raw sewage
I hate to say it, but its played again
His structure is outdated like old buildings, a thing of the past,
but maybe he could rap...before stella got her groove back
Played again...

Overall - Take A Trip To Wackness Emergancy Center, you need work on ya punches

ok now Lirael.. this is how ya verse shoulda looked if u were gon use that struct

Its venom this Vet Spits, and your my Next Bitch
cause the only people that have Trouble with Word's...
...are Dyslexic's!
Dont try to Hollar Kid, i'll pop ya Collar Lid
cause your whole Career's in Ruins ..
....like an Archaeologist!
Why Bother to Spit?! Its obvious your getting blasted,
Saying goes 'Like Father like Son' ..
.. so im guessing your an overweight, unemployed bastard!
Wont even Blink a Sweat, as i Sink this 'Vet'
and leave Word's Running .. like the fucking Ink was Wet!

ohh.. also.. lay of multis..they mean shit.... like 5% of battling

[B]my vote - even though lirael had fucked struct and overloaded wit multis he still got this wit harder punches[/B}

In my opinion Lirael Got this wit betta Multis and Punches and of course everyone knows that's all u have 2 have to win a battle and he done wat he needed to win this battle, VOTE=Lirael

one, nice verse, dope punches, ending
was tight, you need a couple harder punches,
flow was aight, but not the best, you didnt
have one personal in their dawg, you structure
was pretty good.

definifte, aight verse, aight punches, but not hard
enough, and you needed a couple more punches,
yet again i didnt see any personals from neither of you,
you need to work on that, structure was horrible dawg,
keep workin on your lyrics dawg you'all elevate.

my vote: one

return the favor http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109111

How did i have no personals? Both the 'words' lines were personals you dumb fuck! Lol ..

Nice battle though Word's .. props man.

Lirael did take this....
I also thought he had too many multies but He had hits too and those together can win it for you...
DOn't use so much multies in the future but it was still good
I wasn't feeling Word's verse much at all...
visit WEC
Vote Lirael One

Aight .. can we get one more vote to close this up?

who says the next votes gonna close it? lol...

lirael dropper a better verse although wordz verse was nice 2... his structure was fucked indeed but some harder punchez and multi's did the trick... so
vote - lirael

plz vote on thiz one...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109623

^ You forgot to poll vote ..

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