The Frontlines Tourney Presents:.:K:. vs. Bombz
 

the rules:
10-16 lines
no biting
no feeding
no dickriding/crew/hate votes
both of you must vote on 3 battles. and post the link in the thread.everytime you post a link you will be upping your thread.you will get no 5 uppings because if everyone in this tourney vote on 3 other battles there should be no need.If I see anything suspicious I will not hesitate to contact a mod.
and goodluck to you both.

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.........ite dno wat going on but........im down.............................................. ...check check...................................pz

Drop as soon as possible a.s.a.p...just because I forgot to put the due date in the rules doesnt mean you have to take 5475478 years to key up a decent verse

yo ill drop when i see his check............................................. ...........................pz

You both have until Wednesday to post your verse..if yall dont post it..then both of you are eliminated from the tourney..

calm down dixie boy, im checkin in niggaz, i'ma bout to spit now

Yo..yo. :K:takes so much time, his pace can decay these bones,
Dawg, its time to pay your wage, so often like pre-paid phones,
Allow me to cave in his rib-cage so all beef is deciest and gone,
Fitted with flow you cant say I'm sick cuz 'ill' has been worn,
My type of begining'll make ya' regret ya' fucking skillz were born,
Chills ya as I'm 'cummin', this 'fillin' wouldn't hesistate to killa cop,
Grill ya' until you get hot, you work a pogo stick n' think ya hip-hop,
But stop and think 'frozen' son, These threads I'm steady closing em',
He got picked to batle me and niggah thinks he's the chosen one,
Blowing blunts n' lost em, his life has cost em, as death will cross him,
Fa' eva comin, I lost him, stop me? He must think he's a Trojan condomn,
Bombed him, stomped him, for 5 wins has harmed him,
Luck couldn't help, if 'WB's' whiches came and 'charmed' him....

YO WTF, spit niggah, damn....
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shit........forgot bout this..............aint got time 2nite going out.soz...........ill drop 2moz................pz

ite soz rly didnt see this keying up na......................

Fucka Bomb bitch...cause im sure thats the only thing your dropping,
i can tell your shit was done in a rush..simular to christmas shopping,
bombz is simular to carpet..the way hes getting flored,
K could walk into the red light district..and still wudn't get whored,
already merked you twice...so this is just another one to my list,
your like a blind felidermite boxing..all your punches mist,
i no this is a game of chance like poker..but ill still smash this joker(sig),
what im tripping on is how bombz is a herb..but still k is doper?,
6-lines 8-lines 10? dawg it really don't matter,
bombz is just another fish on a plate...enterd the chipy..
......just about to get batterd...........................

..................pz

Breakdown

Bombz' Verse,
Yo..yo. :K:takes so much time, his pace can decay these bones,
Dawg, its time to pay your wage, so often like pre-paid phones,
Nice Opener

Allow me to cave in his rib-cage so all beef is deciest and gone,
Fitted with flow you cant say I'm sick cuz 'ill' has been worn,
DIdn't Get It

My type of begining'll make ya' regret ya' fucking skillz were born,
Chills ya as I'm 'cummin', this 'fillin' wouldn't hesistate to killa cop,
Grill ya' until you get hot, you work a pogo stick n' think ya hip-hop,
Ya flow got off on this but ya last line was decent

But stop and think 'frozen' son, These threads I'm steady closing em',
He got picked to batle me and niggah thinks he's the chosen one,
Nice wordplay

Blowing blunts n' lost em, his life has cost em, as death will cross him,
Fa' eva comin, I lost him, stop me? He must think he's a Trojan condomn,
Too stretched, but ok overall

Bombed him, stomped him, for 5 wins has harmed him,
Luck couldn't help, if 'WB's' whiches came and 'charmed' him....
Pretty nice Closer

K's Verse,
Fucka Bomb bitch...cause im sure thats the only thing your dropping,
i can tell your shit was done in a rush..simular to christmas shopping,
Damn, that was a dope opener

bombz is simular to carpet..the way hes getting flored,
K could walk into the red light district..and still wudn't get whored,
That was pretty nice

already merked you twice...so this is just another one to my list,
your like a blind felidermite boxing..all your punches mist,
Pretty Decent

i no this is a game of chance like poker..but ill still smash this joker(sig),
what im tripping on is how bombz is a herb..but still k is doper?,
That was wack

6-lines 8-lines 10? dawg it really don't matter,
bombz is just another fish on a plate...enterd the chipy..
......just about to get batterd...........................
Pretty Dope closer.

Punches: K
Wordplay: Bombz
Meta’s: K
Creativity: Tie
Personals: Neither
Flow: Tie
Multi’s: Bombz

Vote: K

This battle was evenly matched. Both emcees came wit nice verses but I felt K got this one wit his constant punchlines. Bombz, your verse had some nice wordplay and punches but K edged you by a little.

POLL VOTES NEEDED
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108481

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111064

That was a tight battle........BombZ had good wordplay and did good with the closer and openeralso good at the wordplay and K had good personals and nice wordplay too. Both had good flow.

Break down
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Punches: K
Wordplay: Tie
Metes: K
Multi`s: BombZ
Flow: BombZ
Vocab: K

Vote-K


Vote on my battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=105968

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Feeble Minded

Yo..yo. :K:takes so much time, his pace can decay these bones,
Dawg, its time to pay your wage, so often like pre-paid phones,
eh, not feeling your opening here.. The flow is decent, but basic. Metaphor could be better. pounch is alright
Allow me to cave in his rib-cage so all beef is deciest and gone,
Fitted with flow you cant say I'm sick cuz 'ill' has been worn,
your metaphor is here alright, wordplay is decent, but your not directing your punch well enough
My type of begining'll make ya' regret ya' fucking skillz were born,
Chills ya as I'm 'cummin', this 'fillin' wouldn't hesistate to killa cop,
eh, flow came off a little... meta isnt the best and i thought your follow through needed some help
Grill ya' until you get hot, you work a pogo stick n' think ya hip-hop,
But stop and think 'frozen' son, These threads I'm steady closing em',
nice concept on your setup, but your follow through needed some help. better punch would have worked it more
He got picked to batle me and niggah thinks he's the chosen one,
Blowing blunts n' lost em, his life has cost em, as death will cross him,
follow through seemed more of a filler type ish
Fa' eva comin, I lost him, stop me? He must think he's a Trojan condomn,
Bombed him, stomped him, for 5 wins has harmed him,
filler, not much of a punch here
Luck couldn't help, if 'WB's' whiches came and 'charmed' him....
ending meta isnt bad.. punch is good, not that bad of an ending

Over all i thought you had an alright verse. Your punchs were alright metaphors could have been a little bit better but decent for the most part. Now your personals i thought could have been in there more.

Punchs-3
personals-1
metaphors-4
rhyme shceme-3
multis-4

15/25




ite soz rly didnt see this keying up na......................

Fucka Bomb bitch...cause im sure thats the only thing your dropping,
i can tell your shit was done in a rush..simular to christmas shopping,
decent opening.. nice metaphor, good play off his name... follow through was a good punch
bombz is simular to carpet..the way hes getting flored,
K could walk into the red light district..and still wudn't get whored,
heh, good metaphor.. punch is straight
already merked you twice...so this is just another one to my list,
your like a blind felidermite boxing..all your punches mist,
nice punch.. follow through is good,metaphor was on
i no this is a game of chance like poker..but ill still smash this joker(sig),
what im tripping on is how bombz is a herb..but still k is doper?,
alright bar i guess
6-lines 8-lines 10? dawg it really don't matter,
bombz is just another fish on a plate...enterd the chipy..
......just about to get batterd...........................
kind of a weak ending but decent concept

Over all your verse was good, nice concepts in there and it flowed pretty well.. The mutlis i thought were lacking but your metaphors made up for that i thought.
Could have used a few personals thought ( few more)

Punchs-4
metaphors-4
multis-1
rhymescheme-3
personals-3.5

15.5/25


Drop an honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108409

Vote- K
He took it with more consistant hard punchs along with good metaphors..

thx...............uppin(1)........................ ................................................pz