The Frontlines Tourney Presents:~Yo What Up~ vs. LuMiNåRy Te-X-t
 

the rules:
10-16 lines
no biting
no feeding
no dickriding/crew/hate votes
both of you must vote on 3 battles. and post the link in the thread.everytime you post a link you will be upping your thread.you will get no 5 uppings because if everyone in this tourney vote on 3 other battles there should be no need.If I see anything suspicious I will not hesitate to contact a mod.
and goodluck to you both.

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yo im in.........

when r verses due??

but lets do this...........

goin all out now.........

Im in...
does Dixie have a set due date or do we make our own...

if so..
lets make the due date for..Jan.25 midnite.pacific time.

coo?

drop ASAP ACTUALLY
MEANING NOW............................

you both have until wednesday to psot your verse..if you dont..then both are you are eliminated from the tourney..

^^^aight..........ill drop sometime wednesday then........i got a lil writers block goin, so whateva.........wednesday it is..........

lol.....no shows is a bitch......but check it out.........

this bitch thought he was tourney bound
but im the stud movin to the next round
cause i got ill flow and im runnin dis show
im just like a bro, and this guys skills is low
no need to try cause ive already won
hes startin to run, but im havin fun
cause im just ill and im movin on
check dis con, ill start to mow a lawn
this bitch sucks ass and raps like he smokes grass
cause im fast wit the mic, and this fag wont last

1 min key.....

lol.........movin to the next round hoes..........

.....Hmm this shud be easy..as 1 2 3.


Expectin a no show..But Yo Ho my Jabs an Punches got u guessin..
Put up wakness cuz he expected Wakshit but i aint Your Reflection..
Next Bitch,U keyed ya verse in a Second..
Advancin?naw Chances are leening to Slim Wayz..
Im a" dope head "Twistin blunts..Ya verse are Punch Free Like Minute made..
Wick rayz got u seein the lite follow it u mite just see the Gates..
Wait,
Your on jenny Craig But still considered a Lite weight..
I cud Tear u apart or save my punches for the head left disconected.
seen Kids that are 217-7
But Your 21-7 wut a vet,Considered as ya overall net Record..
Hopefully these vet lines got u thinkin twice before postin Garbage Weak-An Wak..
Only Wednesday,
thouhgt id no show but i bet ill Beat u Before the weekend pasts.








Keyed in like 2 minutes....Lmao..yo wutup atleast come harder next time..even if sumone no shows..fool.

this bitch thought he was tourney bound
but im the stud movin to the next round
kinda whack and played. No real diss
cause i got ill flow and im runnin dis show
im just like a bro, and this guys skills is low
weak attempt at a punch
no need to try cause ive already won
hes startin to run, but im havin fun
cause im just ill and im movin on
check dis con, ill start to mow a lawn
blah...whackness
this bitch sucks ass and raps like he smokes grass
cause im fast wit the mic, and this fag wont last
no diss


Expectin a no show..But Yo Ho my Jabs an Punches got u guessin..
Put up wakness cuz he expected Wakshit but i aint Your Reflection..
not a bad opener
Next Bitch,U keyed ya verse in a Second..
Advancin?naw Chances are leening to Slim Wayz..
ehh..blah..dont rhyme
Im a" dope head "Twistin blunts..Ya verse are Punch Free Like Minute made..
Wick rayz got u seein the lite follow it u mite just see the Gates..
nice
Wait,
Your on jenny Craig But still considered a Lite weight..
I cud Tear u apart or save my punches for the head left disconected.
seen Kids that are 217-7
decent
But Your 21-7 wut a vet,Considered as ya overall net Record..
Hopefully these vet lines got u thinkin twice before postin Garbage Weak-An Wak..
Only Wednesday,
thouhgt id no show but i bet ill Beat u Before the weekend pasts.
ok finisher

Lum took this. Yo didn't try but, you should never expecta no show. Good battle by Lum. Some lines were stretched but otherwise ok. Yo didn't throw one good punch.

Please drop an honest one here. I took the time for yall http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110513

uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnn

I Forgot Which Too But I Voted On Dixies Battles An Sumones Elses..an I Cant Find Any Otehr Battles To Vote On If There Are Ones Out There Let Me No An Ill Vote.but Icant Find Nay Just A Few No Shows.

Uppin

this bitch thought he was tourney bound
but im the stud movin to the next round
Man, LoL no..... Im sorry but do ya knowfor sure he isnt dropping? not much here
cause i got ill flow and im runnin dis show
im just like a bro, and this guys skills is low
follow through was sort of a punch
no need to try cause ive already won
hes startin to run, but im havin fun
Um, well ya he dropped so this comes off weak
cause im just ill and im movin on
check dis con, ill start to mow a lawn
filler
this bitch sucks ass and raps like he smokes grass
cause im fast wit the mic, and this fag wont last
filler

Over all this was a key due to you expecting a no show... I would have rather wasted a verse that took some more effort than putting a minute key up naw mean?


Expectin a no show..But Yo Ho my Jabs an Punches got u guessin..
Put up wakness cuz he expected Wakshit but i aint Your Reflection..
decent opener... Sort of feeding off his verse, but alright personal off his expection
Next Bitch,U keyed ya verse in a Second..
Advancin?naw Chances are leening to Slim Wayz..
started losing flow here.. follow through could have helt more of a punch. set could have been more directed
Im a" dope head "Twistin blunts..Ya verse are Punch Free Like Minute made..
Wick rayz got u seein the lite follow it u mite just see the Gates..
smutli here coulda came better
Wait,
Your on jenny Craig But still considered a Lite weight..
I cud Tear u apart or save my punches for the head left disconected.
concept is sorta played... the follow through needed more of a punch and directiong.. the metaphor is ok
seen Kids that are 217-7
But Your 21-7 wut a vet,Considered as ya overall net Record..
Hopefully these vet lines got u thinkin twice before postin Garbage Weak-An Wak..
personal here is decent.. punch could be more
Only Wednesday,
thouhgt id no show but i bet ill Beat u Before the weekend pasts.
the eneding is ok.. needed more

Over all your verse needed more direction with harder punchs and metaphors.


Didnt really do the best run downs here due to the fact Yo What Up posted a key verse.

Vote- Luminary Te-X-t
He came with better punchs and metaphors on the simple fact that his oponent posted a keyed verse assumininghe wasnt got to post.

yea but if idid show hed still spit like that

an its not like i tryed

i made it fair by postin my verse in like 3 minutes


an u all got my lines fuked igot sum 3 line bars an shit

^^^what Would Be Really Kool, Is If U Had Showed On Time, Cause I Posted Right At 12, And If U Werent Banned.......

So Fuck U!!!!!!!!!!

LuMiNåRy Te-X-t is banned and DQ'ed.