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Lost Cause
...sometimes it's easier trying, than to face the worst cause there's always another dying man to replace the first but his boots do not thirst, another will come to fill them just another lonely pilgrim standing in the blood of children lost in the flood, we will them onwards to defeat contributing propaganda thorugh the kind words of deceit just a mine or piece of meat? either would will you on wondering what pill you're on, realizing, still, you're wrong to believe in a God that blesses a place as evil as this receive tins of fraud, confessions to deceive the wits of the young men who keep coming in an endless stream but we hung them out to dry, or die to defend the seem- ingly useless civilization on the other side of the globe say "Hi!" to your folks, cause you're the light of the show ..."whats that?" you strut back to front lines of existence orders rumbling with insistence to crush ties of resistance ...and it all goes quiet, you can deny it all you want officials sign a treaty; what of this place we call the front? the war is over now, and i think we lost cause noone will fight for a world thats already hostage Peace. |
quite an expressive drop... a good strong bar to open it up... and pretty consistant thru... liked the way you set to finish it, but thought the wording was a bit off... other than that.. tight....
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i liked it a lot it was very good...........................
dope use of word manipulation...........................good job....... .................................................. |
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Yo good drop.....very deep!!! i like the feeling and emotion put into it.......respect..........Hit me up!
Day & Night Pt 2 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109000 |
I liked this piece alot like Eleete said its very deep i give it a 9.5/10
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..very emotional drop..I don't know what you were feeling at the time but I can see you put lot of emotions into this..great imagery(as ways)..simply a dope piece..
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Good drop Maven...Very good imaginary in this and you thoroughly expressed your point(Tho, I am lacking that knowledge)...Good wordplay on this and you were consistent with good lines through out...7.5/10 drop
Check out my open mic if you will.... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109651 |
yep ... like every one else this was a very nice piece.. start to end... but your BEAT PEICE EVER... but hey... its among the ranks... good drop dunny...
Caesar On3 |
Man that was a really deep piece. I've been wanting to express those kinds of thoughts for awhile now but couldn't put them into something like that, sorry that I can't really give you any ideas to improve on but I really liked it. Hope you can give me some words of advice on some of my stuff.
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