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Se7eN 01-25-04 12:13 PM

Se7eN v.s *-Xplicit-*
 
Rules:
-no feedin
-no bitin
-no recyclin
-10-20 lines
-no hate votes
-no favour votes
-no crew votes
-Due Date=Tonight 6 PM

Check in dawg

*-XpLiCiT-* 01-25-04 12:34 PM

checkin in..

btw..


5 votes to win
3-0 for KO

agree?

Se7eN 01-25-04 12:43 PM

yey I agree********************************************* ************************************************** *****************************

Se7eN 01-25-04 12:46 PM

(verse)

My lyrics eat Xplicit like piranhas, with alot of laughter and drama
Have him more excited then when I showed my dick to his momma
A question Mark, so I keep fucking up and pressin’ sparks
Hit this guy so hard, he’ll light up like a Christmas tree in the dark
Your smoked more than a pack of cigarettes, on a store rack
Your trash and wack, that’s how come I’ll say your made from scratch
Rap is fiction not fact, atleast for you, I can say that has to be true
Never seen you battle before, and I can tell I rap better than you do
I flew a few punchlines, in this battle on the front page of frontlines
His experience is reading a poem, so now he says he has done rhymes
You can never laugh at me, damn dawg it will always be so sad to see
After this win I get, I’ll put it in my sig so you can always stay mad at me
So juss take the loss, your juss a bitch who had to pay the final cost
I got you frozen in your place more than your face if you was Jack Frost

*-XpLiCiT-* 01-25-04 12:48 PM

aight pretty nice verse I'll have mine up soon....

*-XpLiCiT-* 01-25-04 01:10 PM

hey middle weight who u foolin? what message u sendin?//
I said 10-20 lines but from yah class I could make it *seven*//
blabberin poet exlodin his bullshit and whinin bout a crew//
Ur dirt like garbage needs it and garbage needs u to//
I can be a mentor an idol juss ma image can shine a light//
since god dont like u dont mean u gotta ruin a site//
the presence of u makes me feel like I aint even gotta worry//
since u "middle weight" still means u aint goin no where in a hurry//
have u felt the strike of lightning or heart shatterin heat?//
cuz it juss took u off ur seat and its danglin u by the feet//
all is said and done beef is settled on the streets B//
ur a half breed I'm pure blood, it would take more then ur words to reach me//
I'm lookin at u in pure disgust I'm sayin this sadly//
u might as well bow down cuz this juss made me ur daddy//

far from ma best shit I got shit nuf things to do still but we'll se how this turns out

voters...?

Se7eN 01-25-04 02:14 PM

iight uppin' for battles vote people please VOTE upin' x1 vote

PLEASE VOTE

Se7eN 01-25-04 02:34 PM

uppin' x2 please VOTE if YOU VIEW THIS PLEASE VOTE

VOTE>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>VOTE>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>VOTE>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Uppin' x2

...Àû†øpšÿ... 01-25-04 03:23 PM

This Was A Nice Battle But Seven Took This Easily In All Catergories Punches,Personals/Disses,Wordplay Etc..........

VOTE=SEVEN

Se7eN 01-25-04 04:35 PM

please people vote on this battle PLEASE VOTE

Uppin; x3 PLEASE VOTE

Kautious 01-25-04 04:43 PM

this battle was aight but i felt that 7 came to simplistic
your verse wasn't really catching me

on the otha hand X i think had the better verse, he came with nice wordplay and punches and flow was steady adding to that i think the multies also gave him the edge

Nic Caesar 01-25-04 05:01 PM

blabberin poet exlodin his bullshit and whinin bout a crew//
Ur dirt like garbage needs it and garbage needs u to//

LMFAO... vote Xplicit... i can't commit to it... not enuff votes... but good battle... but that punch... did it for me... good battle...

Caesar On3

~Yo What Up~ 01-25-04 05:06 PM

seven - structure was good.........flow was on target.........vocab was nice........multis were tight........wordplay was ok.......i was feelin most of ya punches.......good personals......

xplicit - structure was good.......flow was pretty good.......vocab was ok.........some of the multis were ok.......wordplay was basic.......some of the punches were nice, some were wack.......ok personals.....

conclusion - seven takes this in flow, multis and punches so he gets my vote

VOTE - SEVEN

since i took the time to leave my opinion id appreciate if u two did the same......

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109519

thanx.......

Se7eN 01-25-04 05:49 PM

uppin' x4 please vote people

VOTE PLEASE PLEASE VOTE, IF YOU VIEW THIS VOTE

*-XpLiCiT-* 01-25-04 06:32 PM

do does that make it 2-2 or 2-1? cuz 2 mans voted for me


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