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Se7eN v.s *-Xplicit-*
Rules:
-no feedin -no bitin -no recyclin -10-20 lines -no hate votes -no favour votes -no crew votes -Due Date=Tonight 6 PM Check in dawg |
checkin in..
btw.. 5 votes to win 3-0 for KO agree? |
yey I agree********************************************* ************************************************** *****************************
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My lyrics eat Xplicit like piranhas, with alot of laughter and drama Have him more excited then when I showed my dick to his momma A question Mark, so I keep fucking up and pressin’ sparks Hit this guy so hard, he’ll light up like a Christmas tree in the dark Your smoked more than a pack of cigarettes, on a store rack Your trash and wack, that’s how come I’ll say your made from scratch Rap is fiction not fact, atleast for you, I can say that has to be true Never seen you battle before, and I can tell I rap better than you do I flew a few punchlines, in this battle on the front page of frontlines His experience is reading a poem, so now he says he has done rhymes You can never laugh at me, damn dawg it will always be so sad to see After this win I get, I’ll put it in my sig so you can always stay mad at me So juss take the loss, your juss a bitch who had to pay the final cost I got you frozen in your place more than your face if you was Jack Frost |
aight pretty nice verse I'll have mine up soon....
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hey middle weight who u foolin? what message u sendin?//
I said 10-20 lines but from yah class I could make it *seven*// blabberin poet exlodin his bullshit and whinin bout a crew// Ur dirt like garbage needs it and garbage needs u to// I can be a mentor an idol juss ma image can shine a light// since god dont like u dont mean u gotta ruin a site// the presence of u makes me feel like I aint even gotta worry// since u "middle weight" still means u aint goin no where in a hurry// have u felt the strike of lightning or heart shatterin heat?// cuz it juss took u off ur seat and its danglin u by the feet// all is said and done beef is settled on the streets B// ur a half breed I'm pure blood, it would take more then ur words to reach me// I'm lookin at u in pure disgust I'm sayin this sadly// u might as well bow down cuz this juss made me ur daddy// far from ma best shit I got shit nuf things to do still but we'll se how this turns out voters...? |
iight uppin' for battles vote people please VOTE upin' x1 vote
PLEASE VOTE |
uppin' x2 please VOTE if YOU VIEW THIS PLEASE VOTE
VOTE>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>VOTE>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>VOTE>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Uppin' x2 |
This Was A Nice Battle But Seven Took This Easily In All Catergories Punches,Personals/Disses,Wordplay Etc..........
VOTE=SEVEN |
please people vote on this battle PLEASE VOTE
Uppin; x3 PLEASE VOTE |
this battle was aight but i felt that 7 came to simplistic
your verse wasn't really catching me on the otha hand X i think had the better verse, he came with nice wordplay and punches and flow was steady adding to that i think the multies also gave him the edge |
blabberin poet exlodin his bullshit and whinin bout a crew//
Ur dirt like garbage needs it and garbage needs u to// LMFAO... vote Xplicit... i can't commit to it... not enuff votes... but good battle... but that punch... did it for me... good battle... Caesar On3 |
seven - structure was good.........flow was on target.........vocab was nice........multis were tight........wordplay was ok.......i was feelin most of ya punches.......good personals......
xplicit - structure was good.......flow was pretty good.......vocab was ok.........some of the multis were ok.......wordplay was basic.......some of the punches were nice, some were wack.......ok personals..... conclusion - seven takes this in flow, multis and punches so he gets my vote VOTE - SEVEN since i took the time to leave my opinion id appreciate if u two did the same...... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109519 thanx....... |
uppin' x4 please vote people
VOTE PLEASE PLEASE VOTE, IF YOU VIEW THIS VOTE |
do does that make it 2-2 or 2-1? cuz 2 mans voted for me
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