Freestyle about life
 

Freestyle about life

Life I know is hard on everyone and anything that lives..
Your ideas leak out your brain like it was made out of sieves..
No way to tell others what you would like them to know..
No way to tell which way your whole lifes gonna go..
Just play each day hour to hour, make right decisions..
Like you have the power, just say fuck to givens..
Don't take anything for granted, your whole view is slanted..
Like a dog that just sat and panted, keep this idea as planted..
None other than you can win your own game and win some fame..
Just hit the record make it spin, hit the beat and shout out your name..
Don't let others tell you your wrong, just keep spittin until it runs out..
Be like the drummer ring your gong, don't run from life just turn about..

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