Taktik (8-3) vs. 13th Disciple (7-3)
 

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um..ur gay...i just battled Tik..


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yes this is dumb...........i jus up and lose the LW title too?

this is truely gay

go 10?

thats cool

Another Battle? But He's Gotten So Dull & His Shit's Soft...
He Keeps Tryin To Beat Tak's Collection...The IRS Is Pissed Off!....
We All Know When You're Old...In Bed...You Kinda Lack The Purpose...
So...
13th Keep Playing Super Mario...Till Your Plumbings Back In Service!...
But I Have Respect For Elders...And 13...Respect I'm Keepin'...
So...
I'll Let You Call The Shots...As They're Hitting Your Mid Region...
But How's Your Wife? We All Sense Your Lack Of Taste...But....
I Can See Why You Not Only Came Outta Da Closet...
You Ran Straight To The Gay Club!...
So Stop Forgetting When I Merk...Old Age Can Really Make You....
This Time It's For Whom The Bell Tolls...
But Zack Or Screech Ain't Here to Save You!.....

Last week defeated u wit ease...again we battle...but why should i try?
...when ur not even a threat..shit..its apparent u lost Hope...when Bob died
Again i'll deny ur victory...peeped the Mag..now ur dickryders startin to hate
...predictin i'll lose?!..lol..i'll keep this Locked..& watch them slowly lose Faith
lets switch up the pace...point out ur place..of residence ur from Canada eh?
...so close to America but not quite...cuz u'll always be far from whats great
i can't relate..to ur structure...so u changed it well let me follow my hunch...
...since when did 2 lines of shit...add up to one long ass extended punch?
played much?...ur used concepts about gays, age, blah blah...seriously..
...u could be the next spokesman for frito lay..cuz Tik..ur dangerously cheesy!

V/ TaKtiK

Tak - He Came With A Few Nice Witty Punches
I Migha Seen One Played Concept But Other Than
That He Had A Solid Verse.

13th - Started Off Decent But Then Fell Off After
Like His Second Bar. The Last Bar I Was Like Lol No.
That Was A Pretty Bad Way To End A Verse And
I Also Wan't Feelin The Extended Punch Line.

So All In All I Vote T-Dizzle For An Overall Better Verse.

Another Battle? But He's Gotten So Dull & His Shit's Soft...
He Keeps Tryin To Beat Tak's Collection...The IRS Is Pissed Off!....
blah..avg punch ...not boring or interesting..inbetween...
We All Know When You're Old...In Bed...You Kinda Lack The Purpose...
So...
13th Keep Playing Super Mario...Till Your Plumbings Back In Service!...
no. im tired of sex shit tak, you know its not good to read so dont put it in.
But I Have Respect For Elders...And 13...Respect I'm Keepin'...
So...
I'll Let You Call The Shots...As They're Hitting Your Mid Region...
average punch.
But How's Your Wife? We All Sense Your Lack Of Taste...But....
I Can See Why You Not Only Came Outta Da Closet...
You Ran Straight To The Gay Club!...
a little funny...
So Stop Forgetting When I Merk...Old Age Can Really Make You....
This Time It's For Whom The Bell Tolls...
But Zack Or Screech Ain't Here to Save You!.....
I dont understand. Sorry. so, average, everyday, filler. lol

Last week defeated u wit ease...again we battle...but why should i try?
...when ur not even a threat..shit..its apparent u lost Hope...when Bob died
played.
Again i'll deny ur victory...peeped the Mag..now ur dickryders startin to hate
...predictin i'll lose?!..lol..i'll keep this Locked..& watch them slowly lose Faith
almost nice... filler...but above avg filler... if that makes sense...
lets switch up the pace...point out ur place..of residence ur from Canada eh?
...so close to America but not quite...cuz u'll always be far from whats great
dissing his country but that barely hits him at all...
i can't relate..to ur structure...so u changed it well let me follow my hunch...
...since when did 2 lines of shit...add up to one long ass extended punch?
u used something similar in your legends battle vs evolve.. not feelin it much either time..
played much?...ur used concepts about gays, age, blah blah...seriously..
...u could be the next spokesman for frito lay..cuz Tik..ur dangerously cheesy!
iunno where this came from, lol. but i dont like it. .

v/ taktik. a close battle. not really good but close. you both need to catch back up to your old selves, and get dope as yall used to be.

2-0 taktik.

Vote = Taktik.

Taktik, You started off good with the first punch. The IRS was witty and actually made me laugh. After that punch however, I didn't feel the other punches. Mario and plumbing... blah, not really feeling it and it wasn't needed. The punches/region line was nice. And you finished off ok with the saved by the bell flip.

13, The Bob Hope line... predictable... and I'm certain someone else has used that before. The canada and faith punches were blah. Weak. Long ass extended punch was blah and didn't hit. Your finisher was also blah. Dangerously cheesy? You could've had something way stronger.

This goes to Taktik just for more, harder hitting punches.

um...okay i guess...lol


anyways....regardless of who wins this...



sign me out....

13th you had hella dots in your verse lol. Both came alright had some lines here and there but I think Tak pulled it out with better lines. Althou nothin was dope.

vote- Tak

tak wins.
13th loses.
closed.