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Feeble Minded 01-26-04 12:00 AM

COM (4-5) vs. Jack N Bank$ (1-1)
 
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COM 01-26-04 10:10 AM

checkin in................. 10 lines?

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109919

KoNcEpT 01-26-04 04:19 PM

Yeh...10's Good...

Voted On...

Tak Vs 13th
Lirael Vs Def Con
Token Vs Wise Ways.

Mr.Christensen 01-27-04 02:34 AM

LOL....yup
HA HA HA

COM 01-27-04 05:47 PM

EDIT:read his sig

You're unstuck...keep ya lid on...this herbs lyrics flow like jam
Killing kids since 03... but he's yet to face a man!
This net geek must be kiddin me... Fuckin nerd tryna rile me
I'll leave more question marks... over ya ability than ya smilies!
I... fink.. i'lll.. stik... a.. bigg.. nife... in.. yor... lung....
^I bit that from Jack..... his Koncept's keep it dumb!
You're scum.. fucking mug.. don't make me start on your crew
The Realist posted above... and came harder than you!
Fucking no-one.. stick to audio... no wonder ya lame
Coz you took all ya concepts... and use them for a name!

COM 01-27-04 08:09 PM

HELL NO.... KONCEPT HAS ERASED HIS SIG........... and most of my punches are based on what was in it........

Thesis 01-27-04 08:10 PM

Shut Up Hoe. Your Shit Was Pre-Written
Cuz I Deleted That Shit Off That Shit A
Looong As Time Ago But It's In This Sig
Anyway. I'll Get At This Tommorrow.

COM 01-28-04 03:53 AM

prewritten?? you took that shit off your sig like yesterday or the day before coz i wrote that the night before last and posted it yesterday and if you arent planning to prewrite then why didn't you drop a keystyle while you were here???

BTW how the hell could i include the realist's post in an pre-writ verse??? check the post times, this also shows how reecently you wiped your sig

Thesis 01-28-04 08:08 PM

Blah....

Stop Tryin To Be Bold, Like Swimmers You Should Take The Dive.
Every One Knows Your Stlye's Old,
Quote:
Originally Posted by inspire
For gods sake you used a line I heard Jeff Foxworthy use in 95'

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.
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You Are A Useless Moron, & Your Life's About To Be Ended.
How the Fuck Can Your Wits End?
When There Was Nothing to Begin With!
Your Rhymes Are Garbge, Whatch Me Stuff Em And Can It.
It's Like He Wrote His Verse On A Stone Tablet
Cuz People Always.... Take His Wordz 4 Granite!
I'm Better Than You HOW Many Times Do I Have 2 Prove It?
Knockin Em' Stupid...
I'll Smack COM Wit A CD Player...So He Can Face The Music!
Its W.E. Though, YOU Rep Wits End I Shoudn't Judge Ya Intellect.
Cuz If Health Is Wealth..
Well...... Your About To Be In A Lot Of Debt!

Word Up
Vizoooooooooooooottttttttteez

Thesis 01-29-04 03:50 PM

Ups....

NewPort 01-30-04 12:31 PM

This was an okay battle
Not really much that stood out from either
but koncepts opener. That basically did the battle for me.
COM you did aight.. sum good punches, maybe if you worded
them better it would have helped.. but overall i think
Koncept hit you harder here

v/ Jack

Lethargic 01-30-04 04:56 PM

Okay, I read this battle 3 times. Just cause I like both of you and wanted to get a thorough view of the verses.

COM - Your Smilies and Face a man line's were nice. After that beginning, you really fell off. You're TR coming better than him line was nice, but it's been done. So..

JNB aka KoN - Foxworthy/No WiTs were nice. Then you likewise fell off. 4 Granite/Face the Music Lines were like COM's TR line.

The deciding factor in this battle was who threw more punches...and came less played in the end. YOu both started off nice...then just plummeted. At first, I gave it to COM, but after a reread or two, it seemed like KoN had the more consistent/less played verse. The only reason I decided on COM after the first time I read it was cuz of KoN's weak closer. Opening/Closer are key points to a verse.

Vote ~ KoN

COM 01-30-04 05:12 PM

daaamn i thought i had him but thanx for being honest

COM 01-31-04 12:45 PM

uppin

Taktik 01-31-04 02:21 PM

V/ Kon

damn youve gotten alot better too....some nice witty punches.....and a overall good verse...

Com u came ok...thought u might take it had a couple good lines rest were blah...but keep workin


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