4885 vs ferrari
 

You know the rulez, lets go.
Drop now.

Im checking in... I will drop my verse in like five minutes, get ready to drop yours as well, one two, three....

checkin in........................................

My flow’s sick, get this kid some get-well-soon cards,
He’ll be merked quick, soon as I drop my few bars/
Sympathy and sorrow, emotions I direct to his retarded style,
It aint hard to see it’s borrowed from Em’s freestyles-in-8-mile/
Just saw that movie, now thinks he’s hard enuff to move me,
Fight a losing battle? Don’t do it,
unless you punch hard as an Uzi/
Which I’m sure you don’t, all you are, is a stupid newbie/
That’s got real life confused with what he saw in the movies/
This is abuse, for God’s sake he’s a newbie/
Lets conclude this, this fools deluded,
Assuming he could battle me was rash and foolish/
Piece of advice muthafucka., don’t do this/
Cuz you’d never be high enuff even if you were a stewardess/

your only battlin on here coz you aint got a sex life
the only thing you be slottin is your floppy in ya disk drive
because your rhymes are pre written under closer inspection
so ya gonna get NO votes, like bush in an iraqi election.
this battle could go two ways like a north and south poll
but in this poll i'm gonna win,coz your rhymes are to cold and old.
like september 11 your spit is just two plane
your just another wacko cracko to be found mentally insane.

ferrari must be crazy to go against me.
(change of style)

while spittin his verbal shittin, while sittin in a mental institution
head twitchin and leggz kicking, spending all his time fittin and
face lickin, when he'd be better off watchin the time tickin
without spittin.

thats it its over your times elapsed,
never mind theres always next time go back your(to) bitchslapped.

ferrari = punches were ok, structure was good. you could of used a little more word play tho.

4885 = nice wordplay, structure was ok, punches hit where they needed to be hit. not a bad spit.

punches = 4885
wordplay = 4885
structure = ferrari
flow =4885

vote = 4885

thanks............................................ ...uppin.............

Ill shit both of you....But i like 4885's style more

4885
because your rhymes are pre written under closer inspection
so ya gonna get NO votes, like bush in an iraqi election.

sick shit right there as well as.....

like september 11 your spit is just two plane
your just another wacko cracko to be found mentally insane.

nice....both of you!! Vote 4885

thanks for the feedback man, uppin....................

uppin.............................................

Whats 4885? ya birthday? If so we da same age lol. Anyway 4885 won this, nice flow and punches, Ferr had no flow and the shit was a pain to read.
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Kinda close..

Ferarri.. nice verse.. came consistant, but no punches really stood out... lack of creativity..
4885.. more creative punches... good wordplay attempts etc.. the second verse let it down in my eyes tho.. good idea but the multies were executed poorly..
Overall.. a better verse.. but only just.. close battle..

Vote - 4885