AK- mixa vs. Cashvillin
 

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no crew votes
no hate votes
no dick riding

verse is due tomorrow aight man, I forgot to put it down


*pickin up da mic*

i'll pick you up and puncture a hole through you like a voodoo doll
blood jus falls downstream and gushs out as if it were Niagra Falls
I spit bars dat Golden Corral and Shoney's haven't even probably carried
shoveling dirt on your computer it's your final resting place to get buried
your pad and pen nigga go ahead jus set it on da ground
even though i'm on my computer I'm still gonna shut it down
my lyrics have you running around in circles like a dog chasing it's tail
home boi in yo mind keep thinking i'm a test to ace and you gonna fail
your girl told me riding your dick was like a bike with training wheels
erectile dysfunction must really make it "hard" for sensation to feel
Cashville is Trashville mainly straight trash from your trashed lyrics
your armored fortification I've cut through and lyrically pierced it
all your vital organs and signs are left all in da open
swallowing my lyrics are horespills keeping you choking
AK have unloaded da 47 leaving you mentally affected
you'll reign forever and ever on "Rap Battles Rejected"

aight.......here's mine

First off let me tell you that shit was so wack
Your flows a damn joke that dont even make me laugh
I know your ass is broke, so your coming after Cash
Ill leave you smoked like a fat pound of hash
Bite the curb you nerd, Ill murder you fast In fact
your already on my nerves, your verse is like a rash
the worst that Ive ever heard, you dont deserve a chance
So I flip 2 birds, one for you and your 2 only fans
Man I cant stand not even a gram of your ass
Ak-mixa, what the fuck kinda tag is that
your into dicksucking and flapping your trap
You aint getting nothing, no votes, not ever one clap
Your a fag and wack, go home and do the math
it's like attack of the clones each track you rap
your a down south drone, lost without a map
better stick to flippin burgers and serving fries jack

- Villin

cashvillin nothin personal but yours was tight man... uppin

uppin for votes don't sleep on dis
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Ak took this battle, ppretty onesided I thought. AK had some nice punches and metas, even tho some were a lil played. His personals weren't the best tho, but Otherwise he had a creative verse
Cash your verse didn't seem to flow at times. Some lines had a lot less sylobals then others which messed it up. You had a few ok punches, but much of your stuff was played to hell. Keep elevating tho.
Please drop an honest vote here guys. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110084

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uppin.....................
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ak got this.. really clever stuff but close overall battle..
really good battle ak had more punches that hit really
soo therefore hew wins lol.. both had good structure to

Vote- Ak

Whack vote gone.
-Axe

Ak's punches and Personals were good. I also think that Ak had nice metas.Villins verse didnt really flow, he had some good punches but could of had more. So Ak gets my vote.
peace.

Whack vote also gone.
-Axe

cash nice verse but it was a bit simple
ak ur verse was a bit more complex so ill give it to....................................
vote-ak

check my battle out please
vs outcome (tourney battle)
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109556

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Appreciate the chance........Well meet again
 

Lets get some more votes this way guys.......kinda onesided right now - villin

Both Verses Were A Little Weak...But....
Ak Got This One With Better Metas And An Overall Better Verse....
Good Try Tho Cashvillan.....You Almost Had It....
OVERALL VOTE-> AK-MIXA

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come on people be serious.....this man is wack........VILLIN takes this

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ak had nice metas some hard hittin punchlines and overall jus ill verses

cash your shit had some nice punches and your verses was sloppy

vote-ak

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