First Rap Post In RB Feedback 1-10
 

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Lyrically Wanted Like KroOkz And ~thugs~
You Sp1TTin *Dope* Shit Like crackheads on ~drugs~
Step To The mic Dawg You Aint Got ~balls~
Leave Ya Body Rottin In THe Niagra ~FALLS~
Yo Shit Stink So Bad Like Milk N ~beans~
By Any ~MEANS~ rappin rapidly like ~machines~ coast to coast like west coast ~marines~ got ya in stitches like denim blue ~jeans~
Got Ya Lookin Green Like Fresh Sea ~weed~
Yo Girl Da Soil And Im Bout TO Stick IN My ~SEED~ (yall get it?)
You A Joke Like MTV'S Boilin ~points~
I'm Hittin Yo Brain And All Ya ~joints~
Like Poision Venom Crashin Yo ~brain~
Like A Hackin Device Smashin yo ~mainframe~

Just Aa Short Rap YO !

Murda INC!!

it was alright but when you said murder inc it ruined it for me, i'm not a big 50 fan but i like shady/aftermath but overall a nice quick rhyme keep it commin'

good 4 your first post.

Aight Guyz Thnx

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