double-0 seven vs Whitelightning (Half Of Slips)
 

This Is The First Part Of Battle For Slips. We Are Doing Topical and Regular Battle.

First Up Is Regular.

10-16 lines
Due Jan. 30th
No Crew
No D/R
No Hate

checkin in...this should be fun...I don't do regular...so i gunna have to teach myself over night...good luck..you'll need it.

well looks like you give yourself 3 days...........
we is on the same level, i cant really do topicals!!

but 3 days to do a damn battle???

Why You Gettin Involved With This Lightning Dunny
Learn To Walk By Yourself Without Hanging Onto Mummy
Nigga, RB Should Create A Forum Called "Daycare For Hurbs"
Than You Could Change Your Sig To "My Spot Is Well Deserved"
You Were Tellin' Future When You Signed Up For You Name
Double Zero Wins And Seven Losses In This RB Net Game
Your Sig May Have Exposed Me Like The Paris Hilton Sex Tapes
Maybe You And Her Should Spend The Money And Get Chest Fakes
It Would Only Suit Your Style, An Emcee With Tits, Love The Switch
Your Considered The Ja Of This Site, Your Still A Pussy Ass Bitch
You Attempt To Threaten' My RB Lively Hood Like Well Known Vets
It's Too Bad The RB Group Thinks Your Whack, Your Not Even Second Best
For Someone With Pink Slips Involved You Still Came Out Weak
You Just Been Struck Son, Go Back To Being A Fuckin Net Geek

you should of used the elemants to put me to sleep,
but you released you storm, an i only felt the breeze.
it like like 'planks of wood', you leavin me that 'board',
shouldnt of accepted, easy route..................
.............but you decided to take the 'long winding road',
beat ya 'text' black an white, your loss even look official,
whitelighting bein shitted on, like ass wiped tissues.
in this battles he's fucked, can only count on his hands,
i'm giving him abuse, like full-angry football stands,
impregnate him with a loss, leave him stretch merkings*
losing his name, is like the SS final, hes left hurting
i knock white, leave him shaking like nervous knees,
i cant take him serious......
....after i heard he wanted his crew to drop a text CD**,


*he lost in the SS final, read his interview

*in his crew called D.O.I, he wanted all the members to collab, on a 'text CD'

*girls get stretch marks when they prgenant,


edit for typo

good luck

double0seven wins this one. came harder with some nice punches and metas and personals. that closer really had me laughing man! did he really want to do that!!?!? lol. whitelightning your shit was aight...but like u said u dont really do regular battles and topical is more of your thing....it showed here in this battle. nothing was to creative and whitty and the setups/punches didnt really connect in a clever way like they should....

vote: double

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lol shit i saw white lightnings name toay and said dam this kid still hasn't got pink slipped?
way back from elements

but this was an ok battle
lightning your verese was a lil basic and could of been moe productive on the punche side
your flow was aight to.

double yu had some good puches but you aid you edited it for typos, not enough as i can see, but still it was aight you had some goo punches but that little cut off part was messy

good battle though, vote:double

nice battle I loved the finisher by 007 text cd lmao anyway i also thought w/l had a good verse but nothing especialy popped out or hit me as being a tight line so because of 007's nice wordplay and tight punches he came harder

vote = 007

007 takes this, He had some tight metas and punches. White, battlin aint ya thing, but I seen you do topicals and ya dope, so good luck with that part. 007 wins because he was more original and had less played lines while also having harder punches. ~1~
Please drop an honest vote here guys. Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110074

wow..007 next time you get dickriders...make sure they are allowed to vote in elevated..stupid hurb....uppin

007 wins for better metas and harder hitting punches/personals......good battle tho..........007 edged him out in almost every catagory.....WL.......good vocab strucutre and flow ya punches were like 007 said " only felt the breeze".....

v - 007

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Vote ~ You both suck and should both be slipped.

Those verses were utter garbage. Go back to Front Lines.

doulbe o wins this... not cuz he came out extremely dope cuz he didn't
white's punches just didn't hit hard at all except for few...when...
double o's were consitant ok hitting punches...most seemed to be fillers tho
pretty sad battle but eh... not too bad guessing 1 of u don't do text

vote-double o 7

One sided battle..

Whitelightning...
You cam wack as fuck
and that dunny shit..
Its to fuckin old.. get a new word
And ya punches were decent
But some were weak..
No vocab what so ever...
Verse was pretty weak if you look at it...



Double-O seven
Flow was ok...
Punches were good
Personals about elements
That was good..
Ya went way back in tha day
Verse was decently better than Whites
Kinda weak tho...


Vote-Double O seven
Simply came better in punches
And actually used personals...