Brethren vs. yngnizzie
 

10-12 lines
You drop in about an hour, I'll drop soon after
House Rules

Now I Dont Know How To Start This Out//
Im A Beginner Shes A Lightweight Im Gonna Try To Knock Her Out//
When Say Her Im Talkin Bout Him//
Cuz He's Tha Nigga Go To The Club Dressed Up Like Lil Kim//
And Fuckin Wit Me U Wont Get Far//
Cuz I Bust Shots At U To Make U Dress Up In A Dress And A Push Up Bra//
I Really Dont Know How To Say Brethren//
But Gettin Smart Wit Me I Make Sure U Wont Be Able To See Again//
And I Leave Ur Picture On That Shirt//
But Unfortunitly Ur Bodys 6 Feet Deep Under That Dirt

Funny yo...

I'm trashing this ho with a vision, but even this bitch knows that he's missing,
A punch, haha, battle me, you fucking yellower than Moe from the simpson's,
My verse is fucking 'too sick' like I was way too over-descriptive,
This dudes kissing light posts in winter, just to show that the 'lip-sticks',
Dudes just a 'motormouth', like Jewish people owning 'Yamahas',
While you singing some ladi-da's, I'll whip your ass worse than karate-mom's,
Fuck pain, I'll leave this kid with more Boo-Boos than Yogi the bear,
Suck on my nuts, like it's holy to bear, still worried? I say it's only a pair,
Brethren come across you more than your church boss,
Tuck yourself in, I already presented you with your first loss.

uppin #1 .

uppin # 2 .

Brethren had this battle fairly easily.. wasn't a bad punch in his verse.. very creative wordplay and originality. Flow was there too. yng, just elevate some, work some better punches into there and be more creative.

Please hit up my battle. Return the favor.
vote- brethen

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109424

brethren takes this ..

simply because the other kids entire verse was filler...

yng, ya verse wasnt horrible like most FL verses are..

you just definitely need to elevate and go to WEC, learn there.

You need to compare things in order to make punches, for example..

you didnt do that, just keyed up some stuff and made it rhyme.

Brethren, you did ok.. you tried too hard to be creative tho i think.

just let it flow, and make sure it rhymes well and theres a punch...

and make sure the punch is original, and you'll be ok...


V/ brethren.

go vote here fairly, or i will take this vote back:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108165

Brethren took this shit most def.
He had some pimpin' word play and there was a good flow.
Nizzie just needs to elevate, and be more creative
He just came out yappin' bout how Brethen dresses like Lil' Kim.
Anyways... its just one sided
VOTE-> Brethren

Alright uppin again #3, Feeble you already won that battle

This Was A Decent Battle Both Had OK Verses But Breth Had The Best Overall With The Punches,Disses/Personals,Wordplay Etc....

Vote=Breth

REturn Da Favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109945

doesnt count, feeble.

uppin # 4 .

iight...

Brethen takes this... other kids verse was jus filler... and played filler at that... learn to punch man...

Brethen you had some decent punches... wasnt brilliant... keep it up tho...

vote - Brethen...

vote on this... then i'll poll... sick of bein slept on...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110237

OUT

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Feeble Minded

ill hav to go for brethren on this one his punches were better and i liked his style
vote -breth

check my battle please
vs outcome (tourney battle)
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109556

iight...

im back to poll my vote... keep elevating both...

pz

OUT

Alright Uppin #5, can I please get two more reall votes, I will return the favor