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sendin' three thru ya fitted is tha only way you'll be leakin wit knowledge/
cuz im too trite to ignite and acknowledge i can't be touched/ and you couldn't -oversea- me if you worked for tha dutch/ i know it's alot for you ta clutch but juss grasp on and try/ cuz its no lie i spit wicked shit like birds on tha fly/ and you ask why be brash about tha task at hand/ when its no secret you leaked it in tha palm of my hand/ and i aint talkin' bout givin' up classified information/ im talkin' bout settin' you down in front of a standin' ovation/ bullets racin' and pacin' lookin' for victims faces/ ready ta zero in on tha -pussies- detected by tha traces/ |
Just remember 1 Open mic per day, since i missed it yesterday i'll let it go.
But this was alright...structure was ok in this i thought....your content in this was ok, could be better though i think....had some alright vocab in there.....try adding some better multies to this though....but keep at it. |
only one day.........wtf is up wit that......its a rap site ta rap on.........~1~
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