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Telekinetic Vs skandalz18
12 lines max
blind spit 1 hour after check in to post No hate or dr |
checking in
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yo man you gonna battle?
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This guy's got forty posts all in call out but none in competition
First lesson for my opposition will cost forty bucks commission In this battle mission you missin an lost like kidnapped bind people Need to just give up before ya get stuck an hung up like pine needles This guys already feeble at eighteen weak an lyrically disabled Why the hell you on this sight at night you should be cradled I'm an unstable predator you're at bottom of the food chain wit placid habits I can done see these illmatics got you fucked up an MC ate like acid tablets This guy's had it your skills are foreign static if any an not of this Earth Squirts been punked since birth an zero worth since days of star search Your first crew was khmerboyz pathetic even with a ghostwriter imposter I found a foster home for the wack. Guess what? They relocated ya roster |
Ya wanna be hard but ya like Lauren hill cuz ya killin me softly
Ask DJ Paul how I hypnotize minds Ya must me playin ketch up cuz ya runnin be heinz Its "55" the bomb fuck the logo shit Ya girl jumps on mah dick like a pogo stick You no what?...times up it’s the dead line Ill blast your ass and you wont even make the head line You cant handle my metafives or duck my punch lines Ill eat this cat up like big pun at lunch time You know if you start to mess with me there is gonna be trouble My lyrics are like AIDS cuz they spread for sure Don’t try 2 mess wit me cuz there wont be any cure |
Shit Telekenetic wins this, morew advanced verse. Tele had nice punches and a good rhymescheme. Also some nice metas in there too. Skandalz came kinda newvish as expected. Not awful for a beginner, but much room for improvement.
Please drop an honest vote here guys. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110074 |
skandalz if i'm not mistaken u disses u'rself in the first line, otherwise not a bad spitt...telekinetic ya structure was a lil messed ya had sum disses but i didn't think much hit except for the cradle line...personally i felt skandalz more but after his first line...lol...it's a hard decision but i'm a go with skandalz...tele ya need sum seperation dawg..vote-skandalz
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First of all skandalz should be banned for bitting. Ive seen almost everyone of his punches on this sight before. Cant you be creative?
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that is my own orignal shit...i had a different name but i forgot what it was so i made this one...man your stupid...jus scared your gonna lose dis battle...PUNK
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some more people wanna vote on this so it isnt stuck as a tie
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Please..... I actually came up with my verse on the spot
I can give you the link........http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ghlight=ketchup That shit wasent even meant for me. I voted in that battle you used it in. lmfao Now whos stupid? |
That was pathetic...
Telekinetic took this easily He had harder punches better structure..not flow.. But an overall better verse.. Scandal..up ya shit homie Be creative..think of shit no one's heard of... so v/Tele hit this up with an honest vote...thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=110028&page=2 |
This guy's got forty posts all in call out but none in competition
First lesson for my opposition will cost forty bucks commission In this battle mission you missin an lost like kidnapped bind people Need to just give up before ya get stuck an hung up like pine needles This guys already feeble at eighteen weak an lyrically disabled Why the hell you on this sight at night you should be cradled I'm an unstable predator you're at bottom of the food chain wit placid habits I can done see these illmatics got you fucked up an MC ate like acid tablets This guy's had it your skills are foreign static if any an not of this Earth Squirts been punked since birth an zero worth since days of star search Your first crew was khmerboyz pathetic even with a ghostwriter imposter I found a foster home for the wack. Guess what? They relocated ya roster __________________________________________________ sruc wasnt that bad overall 7/10 and nice werdplay ok punches ________________________________________ Ya wanna be hard but ya like Lauren hill cuz ya killin me softly Ask DJ Paul how I hypnotize minds Ya must me playin ketch up cuz ya runnin be heinz Its "55" the bomb fuck the logo shit Ya girl jumps on mah dick like a pogo stick You no what?...times up it’s the dead line Ill blast your ass and you wont even make the head line You cant handle my metafives or duck my punch lines Ill eat this cat up like big pun at lunch time You know if you start to mess with me there is gonna be trouble My lyrics are like AIDS cuz they spread for sure Don’t try 2 mess wit me cuz there wont be any cure ____________________________________________ sruc was off a lil overall needs to elavate 5 1/2/10 k __________________________________________ vote/telekinetic hit this up if you will http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109339 |
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battle was weak but Tele difenetely got this..........way more advanced....u can tell da difference in experience...even sayin dat...tele didny really have hard hittin punches, mostly filler, flow kinda off, good multis....my vote goes to Telekinetic
for the better verse hit this battle up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110017 |
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