punchline n fillers in battlin
 

my question is i get told i use madd fillers in my battle verses?
i know i dont have that hardest punches,
but im always told that i use more fillers then punches.
im even losin battles over this, pleeze help?
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I dropped this verse awhile back
so ya could see a verse of mine:

honestly, who the fuck is this Rock1n Flames kid
after that why is he rockin this battle in his sig ?
the retardation got emotional and opened his gift
only to find out that is weaker alias is still a bitch
this flamer burnt his verse startin with his structure
ebs personals burdens his nerves like acupuncture
well cock rock for boobie and cock rock isn't a movie
so cock rock talks about Saddam, so big f'n whoppty
masterbatin punches between us? u best be a girl?
cause this the last line i need 2 end your little world !!
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the last 4 were feedin off his verse,
but the 1st 6 wre directed at my opponett

Do you know hat a punch is?...
If so, at least every other line should be one...

-W1

^ i thought it went set up then punch
like a 1 - 2 combo

a punchline is a line that relates to something else. your only line in there that did was the acupuncture line. it made a comparison to veins.

/\ehhh not really feebs...it doesn't have to be a metaphor to be a punch
you above all others should know this...granted most punches are, but
it doesn't necessesarily <<can't spell:(

anyway a filler line is a line that has no effect, its just there to take up
space hence the name "filler" so if people are telling you that its either
your punches hold no weight and end up being filler...

^ yup thats basically what a filler line is... dont need 10 lines with punches in em so u just add in some shit that basically glorifys yaself and isnt really a punch at all

make sure u aim punches at them...

the retardation got emotional and opened his gift
only to find out that is weaker alias is still a bitch

^ like that wasnt really aimed at him and didnt hit hard... your set up coula been much better and you coula expaned on the punch and how his alias is a bitch