Dirt Off Your Shoulder Remix
 

This is unfinished, but I need feedback. I still have to do another verse. I wanted to see wut yall thought so far b4 i did another verse tho. I tried to flip this beat to a different topic. And no I'm not a wannabe thug. This is actually on some real anger shit that I needed to get off my chest.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/opeymusic.htm

Feedback?

*listening*

hook is funny...nice...lyrics are nice nothing bad i can say about that...
start ad libing...some of the voice overs sound a little distorted but that
could be soundclick...maybe show a bit more emotion

nice shit man keep it up

nice drop

im loving this beat

wish tim would make a beat for me :D lol

the chorus is hot...Lyrics are nice....quality is good....adlibs would make it hotter but was never a fan of adlibs...nice work

Lol That Chorus Was Hot
The Lyrics Were Boring
But You Had A Nice Flow.
Decent Track.

This was semi hard to understand...lyrical content was really sub-par...I understand its a commercial track but ehhh...I don't like the beat...just isn't my style...delivery is kinda annoying...Flow is consistent...Not bad mun...Keep it up...Pz...

when you said "turn that beat up" was someone actualy there to turn the beat up, or were you just sounding cool? j/w

hook - cool, i like
flow - wow, real simple
lyrics - below average
voice and quality were coo enough

hmm i dunno, i guess i just expected more

just soundin cool lol. actually i just couldnt think of an intro for shit so i just went with it

lol word ;)

listenin.. this was hot.. but my mixtape is cancelled opey.. :( thnx for the time..

you fuckin hoe lol. o well i'll still finish it and just post the finished version on here then. no harm no foul

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This was nice, .. beat was catchy, like it suposed to be, .. lyrical content fitted the beat in my opinon , i enjoyed listenening to it, .. nice remixed, w/ the splivit shout out, nice-ness .. *Want to hear the song when its finished ..*

Nice one Opey Dokey o.O I want ur cd

Can I have your babies too?? please?

send me $8 and i'll send u a cd. or u can try to dl it from kazaa but i'll tell the RIAA on u... BIATCH!

where can i send it?? will u autograph it for me? youre my hero

Strange everything is editted by Opey .. ~ I Wonder..o.O