KIllIN . SILENT MUMBLES
 

a listen boy these bitches ass boyz keep talkin they betta shut that lip cause the u.s. got enough room for another coffin and i cant help it im the best that why people dont run that mouth cause i know i will put a hole in they chest and they no not to rush cause once i shoot them i leave them there to let there mathafuckin blood just rush and my shit is one of a kind thats why they mentally ill cause i put a shell in they mind. i kill people for the fun of it and on purpose thats why i got everybody in tennesse already planning their memorial service and all tha fuckin sacred people stop believen in the fagget ass devil and start believen in jesus and they started prayin cause what i write is real whad youll thought i was playin and my shit is whad it seems and im like freddy i kill ya in yo dreams.

why do I think you are 'tenwhore'...anyaway I stopped reading after few lines..I"m sure this sucked anyway..

The title was right on point. I feel the gift...but this really didnt show it. NOT ONE BIT! This was lame.

This was ok....dont put it in paragraph form like that though...put it line on top of line so it helps the flow out in your pieces.....but just work on elevating and you will get to where you want to be.