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Born To Kill 01-28-04 10:52 AM

Born to Kill vs. Ill-Fresh
 
I called out for anyone...

He answered.

10 - 12 lines...

Due in an hour, give or take...

Check in so I know ya down...

Peace

Ill-Fresh 01-28-04 10:55 AM

Check Check...Check Check...
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Born To Kill 01-28-04 11:52 AM

This kid ain't ill, far from fresh, in fact motherfuckin stale...
And with that pussy, bitch soundin name I doubt he's even male.
Profile says he's 14, how sweet that he busts raps at school...
Cept being so young he can only cop flow, in his wading pool.
Fool! Wearin floaties cuz even in shallow water he'd drown...
So ta shut him up I'll bring tha lead, and have him pipe down.
Cuz his mind skipped out, fuckin left, causin disaster in his rhyme...
Since his brain went on vacation, his whackness is workin overtime.
So please explain why ya here, ya ain't a killer like Myers, Michael...
Ya can't rhyme or rap, more useless than ashtrays on motorcycles
And now ya been beat, so humiliation blossoms and grows...
Cuz if talent were fuckin nitro, then Ill couldn't blow his nose.

Ill-Fresh 01-28-04 12:08 PM

ight...check it...

a 'redneck', born to kill for his food, but thats past-now...
this kid 'bends over' and touches his toes to be cracked-out...

there is no beef, but i am goin to merk him in vein...
a 'HEADhunter'?(his occupation)ha ha, theres no need to explain...

he is an old fart on the web, age 3 to the 4...
this battle is an easy bet, lets see, its me and the whore...

he has his signature all wrong, the truth has been bent...
after 5 five is when he 'grips the mic', the merkin begins...(sick)

no wants to here about your life, so stop panicking...
your rhymes couldnt make you a 'penny' if you were anfernee(hardaway)...

no get that constipated look off of your face spit it out...
this bitch couldnt 'eat up emcees' if he was eatin them out...(shit)

Harlem's Finest 01-28-04 12:15 PM

Good battle kinda..

Ill Fresh.. some decent punches.. not too consistant tho.. structure/flow was okay, tho the seperate bars are wack..
The headhunter line was nice.. good personal.. but other than that nothing that stood out..
Good verse overall..
B2K.. tight verse really.. took most aspects.. nothing stood out, mostly due to the fact that is was always hitting consistantly... nice punches throughout, good personals.. flow was on point also...
Real nice battle... kinda close.. but B2K was better overall..

Vote - Born To Kill

Return the favour - http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110373

bonespitter 01-28-04 12:22 PM

THIS WAS A BATTLE IT SHOULD BE A TKO
BORN TO KILL YOU SHOULD STOP BATTLIN NEWBEES YOUR ALWAYS SLAUGHTERING THEM INLCLLUDING MY FIRST BATTLE
I NEVER NEW YOU WERE 2ND ON THE TOP TEN LIST
EASY VOTE
EVERYTHING GOES TO B2K

PLEASE VOTE ON MY BATTLE
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110042

LyRiCaL GeEnUs 01-28-04 02:48 PM

This kid ain't ill, far from fresh, in fact motherfuckin stale...
And with that pussy, bitch soundin name I doubt he's even male.
ehh weak and kinda played with the pussy part
Profile says he's 14, how sweet that he busts raps at school...
Cept being so young he can only cop flow, in his wading pool.
Nice punch and personal
Fool! Wearin floaties cuz even in shallow water he'd drown...
So ta shut him up I'll bring tha lead, and have him pipe down.
decent, not great
Cuz his mind skipped out, fuckin left, causin disaster in his rhyme...
Since his brain went on vacation, his whackness is workin overtime.
creative and a good punch
So please explain why ya here, ya ain't a killer like Myers, Michael...
Ya can't rhyme or rap, more useless than ashtrays on motorcycles
ehh ok
And now ya been beat, so humiliation blossoms and grows...
Cuz if talent were fuckin nitro, then Ill couldn't blow his nose.
pretty good closer


a 'redneck', born to kill for his food, but thats past-now...
this kid 'bends over' and touches his toes to be cracked-out...
played and whack
there is no beef, but i am goin to merk him in vein...
a 'HEADhunter'?(his occupation)ha ha, theres no need to explain...
Oh but there is, you had to explain ya punch which is no good
he is an old fart on the web, age 3 to the 4...
this battle is an easy bet, lets see, its me and the whore...
blah...whack...and you said fart
he has his signature all wrong, the truth has been bent...
after 5 five is when he 'grips the mic', the merkin begins...(sick)
Dun tell me whats sick. lol Decent
no wants to here about your life, so stop panicking...
your rhymes couldnt make you a 'penny' if you were anfernee(hardaway)...
ok
no get that constipated look off of your face spit it out...
this bitch couldnt 'eat up emcees' if he was eatin them out...(shit)
yeah it was shit. Whack and played

BTK takes this battle. His punches hit harder and he had stronger personals and metas. He aslo was creative which is a plus. Ill is a newb, didn't know what he was gettin into. Stilla good spit for a beginer

PLease drop an honest vote here guys. Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110310

Antonio Banderas 01-28-04 02:50 PM

This kid ain't ill, far from fresh, in fact motherfuckin stale...
And with that pussy, bitch soundin name I doubt he's even male.
Good opener

Profile says he's 14, how sweet that he busts raps at school...
Cept being so young he can only cop flow, in his wading pool.
Nice

Fool! Wearin floaties cuz even in shallow water he'd drown...
So ta shut him up I'll bring tha lead, and have him pipe down.
Good consistency

Cuz his mind skipped out, fuckin left, causin disaster in his rhyme...
Since his brain went on vacation, his whackness is workin overtime.
----DOPE ------

So please explain why ya here, ya ain't a killer like Myers, Michael...
Ya can't rhyme or rap, more useless than ashtrays on motorcycles
---DOPE---

And now ya been beat, so humiliation blossoms and grows...
Cuz if talent were fuckin nitro, then Ill couldn't blow his nose.
okay ender, not the best but OKAY__________________
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a 'redneck', born to kill for his food, but thats past-now...
this kid 'bends over' and touches his toes to be cracked-out...
GOOD opener, seems forced

there is no beef, but i am goin to merk him in vein...
a 'HEADhunter'?(his occupation)ha ha, theres no need to explain...
WAK....

he is an old fart on the web, age 3 to the 4...
this battle is an easy bet, lets see, its me and the whore...
Very elementary

he has his signature all wrong, the truth has been bent...
after 5 five is when he 'grips the mic', the merkin begins...(sick)
----DOPE---

no wants to here about your life, so stop panicking...
your rhymes couldnt make you a 'penny' if you were anfernee(hardaway)...
Doesnt rhyme right

no get that constipated look off of your face spit it out...
this bitch couldnt 'eat up emcees' if he was eatin them out...(shit)
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Flow - TIE (Both maintained a steady flow in their verses)
Punches - Born to Kill had the better punches...
Creativity - Born to Kill used a wide range of vocab to increase his creativity
Worplay - TIE
Multies -??? Not Sure.....
Structure - Born to KIll had the better structure

I vote Born to KIll....


Hit these battles up:
Battle Verses Quelude
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109584

Battle Verses Killa Kid
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109803

Wise Mynd 01-28-04 02:52 PM

I think Ill Fresh had some good punches.But Born To Kill gets my vote becuz he had better punches and i liked Ill Fresh personals. Born to Kill gets my vote with Nice Punches and Flow.
Vote: B2K
Peace.

.Iknoevel. 01-28-04 03:36 PM

Btk

This kid ain't ill, far from fresh, in fact motherfuckin stale...
And with that pussy, bitch soundin name I doubt he's even male.
Decent opening...ok wordplay in the first line
Profile says he's 14, how sweet that he busts raps at school...
Cept being so young he can only cop flow, in his wading pool.
Good hit
Fool! Wearin floaties cuz even in shallow water he'd drown...
So ta shut him up I'll bring tha lead, and have him pipe down.
another good punch...
Cuz his mind skipped out, fuckin left, causin disaster in his rhyme...
Since his brain went on vacation, his whackness is workin overtime.
Creative punch...nice
So please explain why ya here, ya ain't a killer like Myers, Michael...
Ya can't rhyme or rap, more useless than ashtrays on motorcycles
Ehh...not really feelin this, good try
And now ya been beat, so humiliation blossoms and grows...
Cuz if talent were fuckin nitro, then Ill couldn't blow his nose.
Creative and a good closer


Ill-Fresh

a 'redneck', born to kill for his food, but thats past-now...
this kid 'bends over' and touches his toes to be cracked-out...
Blah...not feelin it
there is no beef, but i am goin to merk him in vein...
a 'HEADhunter'?(his occupation)ha ha, theres no need to explain...
what? not direct punch and personal was shit
he is an old fart on the web, age 3 to the 4...
this battle is an easy bet, lets see, its me and the whore...
blah again... just cuz u 14 dont mean 34 is old kiddo
he has his signature all wrong, the truth has been bent...
after 5 five is when he 'grips the mic', the merkin begins...(sick)
No not that sick actually...decent i guess
no wants to here about your life, so stop panicking...
your rhymes couldnt make you a 'penny' if you were anfernee(hardaway)...
Kinda played... ok hit
no get that constipated look off of your face spit it out...
this bitch couldnt 'eat up emcees' if he was eatin them out...(shit)
Blah closer

Overall - BTK obviously took this wit his harder more complex punches... btw how many wins u got now btk, you get 100 yet?


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