AKA IDOL WARRIOR vs MC AINES
 

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No Bitin

No d/r no crewe votes

No Copyin

Checkin in.................... U spit first????

checkin in u drop first

rules

10-15 lines
blind spit
no crew
d/r
hate votes

hurry and drop yo verse

Listen up


I turned up to this battle knowin im goner win,
but first Im gonna chew u up n spit u in the bin.
I've seen ur rhymes they all whack
Leave now before i put u in a sack.
I hear alls u do is masterbate just becoz
u carnt get girls and collaberate.
I've heared about u and ur repretation
But when im finished with u, u mite as well take a permenant vaction.
Of all the middle weights ive heard
ur the worst,
Ur rhymes are weak and ur bubble has burst.
Battlin me was a big mistak
This new b jus ate a hole loada ur cake.

^^^ u didnt key that in 4 mins that shit must b pre-written oh well i will key up in a sec

Dischargin toxic blows at u like a MIDDLEWEIGHT(my title) boxer...
Eatin fake emcees teachin u a lesson addin u 2 my "I murked u"roster(ppl i beat)...
Fuck personals, ya reputation’s not something I need to attack...
Cuz regardless of being a bitch, we can still see that ya wack...
Like my rap im staying on top of ur verses..............
Slap you wit da Holy Bible till you drop curses.................
I dont know why u rhyme, when everything u rap is shit...
Like a drunk person drivin, this bitch is just an accident...
Uh, oh...this "fruit" is gettin' bruises, you're time is up, you're outta "season"..
I leave kids unable of breathin', like dead men floatin', you bloated and freezin'..
Im gonna crack ya skull warrior, put ya palms on the thread..
Cuz This battle outta ya reach, Like I glued ya arms to ya head..
Imma bout 2 pop your newbie cherry on a website forum....
My verses are worth money so i know how the judges score em...

uppin 4 votes

Ok.
Mc Aines gets my vote with good flow, and punches. Aka had a good verse but it wasnt as good as Aines. Aka's flow wasnt consistent. So aines gets my vote.
peace.

aight gentlemen, nice battle, nice battle. MC AINES, a soft start, but you definately came through with nice flow, and great punches. Punches enough to knock this challenger out. AKA, your verse has a definate ring of inexperience. It is, at best, simple, lacking punches, and unexciting flow. Now i never hated anyone a day in my life, and i won't start here. All you need perhaps, is a further study of hip hop, lyrics-wise, of some greats. Study flow patterns, formats, lines, metaphors. And come back more elite. There is potential in most people, and i wouldn't doubt that you have that as well. But MC AINES got it though.

A middle weight effort from a heavyweight lyricist,
keep at it...

and also vote on mine please
Maku Jaiiliin the Ominous vs. Chugs4life

Uppin 4 votes......................................

Idol

I turned up to this battle knowin im goner win,
but first Im gonna chew u up n spit u in the bin.
not direct and didnt even hit em[/B}
I've seen ur rhymes they all whack
Leave now before i put u in a sack.
[B]not direct and wack...leave before i put YOU in a sack
I hear alls u do is masterbate just becoz
u carnt get girls and collaberate.
wack...
I've heared about u and ur repretation
But when im finished with u, u mite as well take a permenant vaction.
No... go to Wackness Emergancy Center, u need to El A' Vate
Of all the middle weights ive heard
ur the worst,
Ur rhymes are weak and ur bubble has burst.
Blah..meh..nukka elevate
Battlin me was a big mistak
This new b jus ate a hole loada ur cake.
blah.. lmao


MC

Dischargin toxic blows at u like a MIDDLEWEIGHT(my title) boxer...
Eatin fake emcees teachin u a lesson addin u 2 my "I murked u"roster(ppl i beat)...
blah... ok opener
Fuck personals, ya reputation’s not something I need to attack...
Cuz regardless of being a bitch, we can still see that ya wack...
decent...
Like my rap im staying on top of ur verses..............
Slap you wit da Holy Bible till you drop curses.................
played to hell
I dont know why u rhyme, when everything u rap is shit...
Like a drunk person drivin, this bitch is just an accident...
played again..meh
Uh, oh...this "fruit" is gettin' bruises, you're time is up, you're outta "season"..
I leave kids unable of breathin', like dead men floatin', you bloated and freezin'..
better
Im gonna crack ya skull warrior, put ya palms on the thread..
Cuz This battle outta ya reach, Like I glued ya arms to ya head..
not really feelin it, so-so
Imma bout 2 pop your newbie cherry on a website forum....
My verses are worth money so i know how the judges score em...
Blah...wack


overall - both need extreme elevation but MC Anus did take this......

I turned up to this battle knowin im goner win,
but first Im gonna chew u up n spit u in the bin.
lol, proofread ya shit befo ya submit...get it....and shit
I've seen ur rhymes they all whack
Leave now before i put u in a sack.
I guess these are punches
I hear alls u do is masterbate just becoz
u carnt get girls and collaberate.
doesn't really rhymne or flow. Stay away from gay/sex related lines
I've heared about u and ur repretation
But when im finished with u, u mite as well take a permenant vaction.
blah
Of all the middle weights ive heard
ur the worst,
Ur rhymes are weak and ur bubble has burst.
weak
Battlin me was a big mistak
This new b jus ate a hole loada ur cake.
ok....yeah...um...


Dischargin toxic blows at u like a MIDDLEWEIGHT(my title) boxer...
Eatin fake emcees teachin u a lesson addin u 2 my "I murked u"roster(ppl i beat)...
Dpon't explain shit in ya verse. Otherwise good opener
Fuck personals, ya reputation’s not something I need to attack...
Cuz regardless of being a bitch, we can still see that ya wack...
played
Like my rap im staying on top of ur verses..............
Slap you wit da Holy Bible till you drop curses.................
ok...not great
I dont know why u rhyme, when everything u rap is shit...
Like a drunk person drivin, this bitch is just an accident...
good
Uh, oh...this "fruit" is gettin' bruises, you're time is up, you're outta "season"..
I leave kids unable of breathin', like dead men floatin', you bloated and freezin'..
good multi and punch
Im gonna crack ya skull warrior, put ya palms on the thread..
Cuz This battle outta ya reach, Like I glued ya arms to ya head..
nice
Imma bout 2 pop your newbie cherry on a website forum....
My verses are worth money so i know how the judges score em.
kinda a weak closer

Anyhoo, MC AINES wins this. He threw punches and Idol diodn't really. Idol check out the Wackness Emergency Center dawg, fix ya shit up. MC Aines, good drop from you, considerin ya knew ya didn't have to come hard.


PLease drop an honest vote here guys. Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...d.php?p=1135027

ite ite....mc takes dis kinda fairly.....hiz punches hit stronger....n hiz flow waz titee...
idol- ya shyt waz tite 2...but hiz punches came a lot harer....
so i vote for mc....
punches: mc- hit harder....n made sense
flow: mc aines...kinda soft in da beginning....but caught rhythm
structure:.......
vote: mcaines
nice battle.....no hate
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110456
hit dis battle up.....thnx

Aines takes it.....

aines came with a verse.that had more dept... an he threw punches that connected clean.... he kinda streatched out his bars a little too much but it works...

fav line.

Dischargin toxic blows at u like a MIDDLEWEIGHT(my title) boxer...
Eatin fake emcees teachin u a lesson addin u 2 my "I murked u"roster(ppl i beat)...

idol warrior.... your verse came kinda simple to me not really complex an punches weren't really hitting... next time strestch your verse an try to play words a little bit better....

no fav.

vote- MC aines..

u improved since i last battled you. nice job
return the honest favor an vote on my battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...5177post1135177

Was my first ever battle, Uppin 4 votes.............. And MCs had how many battles

uppin this 4 votes man................this needs 2 b voted on 4 either emcee then closed asap.....