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[Wk1]Wr!te Mind vs Mad Man
Verses Due: Tuesday February 3rd, 2004
Voting Ends: Saturday February 9th, 2004 Topic: Hold On Tight |
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Dedicated to my Granda Louise...For reason's UnEmceeable knows of... Change comes in time, it's an inevitable fact of life It causes so much agony, it leads to so much strife And if you wait long enough, change will happen, it's true But if you wait for change, it may not catch up to you Because people change, and you want them to change back overnight But you may be in for the fight of your life, you may want to hold on tight Life is never what it seems, lies are among us all Whether they deceive, or it's a bluff that you can easily call Secrets buried in the closet rarely get to be revealed People want to deal on their own, so secrets stay concealed Jackie was just like many, had troubles with her spouse Yells often echoed through the hollowed walls of the house Punches often flew, but all of them were at her But she held on tight, she was a better fighter 4 Months Later Cops were finally called in,they thought it was for the best Jackie never understood, it felt like a slug to her chest She cashed in her savings for him to be able to make bail And all the great things she did, seemed to be of no avail All he could see was that it was her fault, he hit her with a bottle of beer And if he had wanted to see who was really at fault, he just had to go to a mirror She stayed through the punches, and she lasted the night She was quite the fighter, she just held on tight Change She thought he could change, it was a matter of time "Things'll get better, and he'll be back to being mine" But beatings continues and court appearences would ensue But he always got bail, and Jackie let the cycle continue Til one time the fighting knocked her into submission If only Jackie's choices had gotten some revision And in the hospital, on life support she sits and continues her fight Not knowing what tomorrow will bring, not being able to hold on tight Change comes in time, it's an inevitable fact of life It causes so much agony, it leads to so much strife And if you wait long enough, change will happen, it's true But if you wait for change, it may not catch up to you Because people change, and you want them to change back overnight But you may be in for the fight of your life, you may want to hold on tight |
Left and Right
In and Out Hold on Tight Left and Right In And Out Hold on Tight Hold On Tight to suds Bubbles that clean and stuff In the shower use the power Use the sweet to clean the sour And hold on tight, With all your might Cuz if you drop the bar ……….You’ll be someone’s bitch tonight Unfavorable Outcome: You let the Ivory slip and skip To pick it up And end up with a dick in your butt Your body is tight…as your Mind grips The reality of rape And how it feels like taking a shit Dropping a monster the size of a baseball mitt But your catching less than feelings Your dealing with a sealant That in the end could prove too much to bare Cuz when shit and seamen stick It could probably tear off your ass hair So your holding on tight to the wall Hoping when he’s done that’s all A tall thin man…..stronger than you Not a minute man…and lasts longer than you Off your pain he feeds As your asshole bleeds Hasn’t torn much…but he lays seeds The size of corn nuts……………… Wow! Sorry Mad Man…I just didn’t have time this week |
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lmao...funny shit. :\ u have a sick and twisted
mind to let me visualize ur lines tho. so u are to never post that again :) and the world will not end. v/o mad. more thought through. |
whoa............incredably dissapointed that i wasted valuable seconds of my life reading that second verse......tha breakdown:
Mad - rhyme scheme- 6.5, story- 8.5, flow- 6.5, total- 21.5 a solid drop from you.......you easily took it, work on rhyme scheme Defcon- rhyme scheme- 6, story- 2, flow- 6, total- 14 you shouldnt have posted this........sorry man, but this was pointless vote- obviously mad man, no hard feelins, vote on my ish, peace, 1 |
V/ Mad Man
Good piece mad....nice story...good wordplay ou won for obvious reasons lol at wm'd verse..... that was gay...and dumb |
Mad Man took this easily with a real verse...
Something deep, heartfelt, and meaningful. WTF were you thinking, Def? Better everything from Madman... Do I need to delve further into this explanation? If so, PM me. Peace |
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lmao... I just didn't want to no-show for Mad Man's sake...he spent all the time I didn't have Yeah... Vote: Mad Man |
Mad Man wins
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