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AK- mixa vs. MuSick
post da shit by da end of da day nigga or else!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
10-16 lines no hate votes no dickriding no crew votes __________________ |
MuSick rhymes couldn't punch my ass even if I was a punching bag
Rap Battler's use Zoloft to read Musick rhymes are depressing and sad do da math of da odds 3 plus 15 equals 17 flows get fucked like highschool porno teens you fell off and jus have gotten batted out da "RB" stadium chewed and spat as much as baseball players changing gum now MuSick instead of resting in piece rest in pieces photograph your loss in a picture frame to freeze it my ass on da toilet to dump rhymes on your ass a fresh newb wearing diapers bout to get a rash don't get mad and pissed over a complex diss now i'm off da toilet and your drenched in shit |
The reason why ur girl went astray
Cuz u got fags dippin inside like u was an ashtray Imma man of industry Ur unknown ur a man of mystery when im finished ur history I take it u hate newbies The rhymes u use to duel me only fuel me to make ur verse literally 'not to be' U've been in the sun too long Ur bein out-done an out-shone it's ur shitty textee verse thats all wrong If i lose its corruption U must be registered more times than one now bare wiv me im nearly done Now don't go uppin Cuz if u do then u've made a mistake it should be ur wrists that u cuttin |
rap/rhyme: ak-mixa had too many lines which didn't rhyme (should have wrote seventeen not 17) especially gum and stadium. i like MuSick line when he rhymed 2 times but he could of ended it with the same rhyme.
ak-mixa floped when he brought out "instead of resting in piece rest in pieces" i was also happy MuSick defended newbies winner: MuSick, because ak's rhymes didn't always fit and sometimes didn't fit at all. |
thats one nil to me
This my first battle imma newbe Ur ova the hill AK on a slippery slope G 1-O Uppin |
uppin...................................
musick you and your friend are dumb fucks, and your shit is gay, and mc.deadeye is a Newb and can't vote for you stupid bitch check da polls...........................fuckin Newb with no talent............................................ .......... .. .. . . |
This battle was aight, but...
Musick: U had okay wordplay, but ur structure and flow was straight garbage. Ur punches were decent, but they were not enough to take him. U gotta elevate next time, man. Ak-Mixa: U had good wordplay, ur structure and flow was kinda wack but way better than his. Ur punches were good, but u gotta come even stronger. Keep elevatin'. Vote: ak-mixa |
uppin for more votes come return da favor............................................. ............
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KID KILLA, Quit riding AK's dick................villin
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MuSick rhymes couldn't punch my ass even if I was a punching bag
Rap Battler's use Zoloft to read Musick rhymes are depressing and sad ^thought it was ok... could have been worded better, ok W/play do da math of da odds 3 plus 15 equals 17 flows get fucked like highschool porno teens ^wasnt very consistant with the bar above... ok, but weak W/P you fell off and jus have gotten batted out da "RB" stadium chewed and spat as much as baseball players changing gum ^didnt rhyme... ok meta, but didnt hit too hard now MuSick instead of resting in piece rest in pieces photograph your loss in a picture frame to freeze it ^nice multi, ok personal... hit ok... my ass on da toilet to dump rhymes on your ass a fresh newb wearing diapers bout to get a rash ^didnt like the rhyming, same word,NO... again the wordplay was quite weak.. hit harder don't get mad and pissed over a complex diss now i'm off da toilet and your drenched in shit ^weak closer,...flowed good,, but didnt hit... The reason why ur girl went astray Cuz u got fags dippin inside like u was an ashtray ^could have been worded better, and hit harder Imma man of industry Ur unknown ur a man of mystery when im finished ur history ^good flow but this is a battle.... punch? I take it u hate newbies The rhymes u use to duel me only fuel me to make ur verse literally 'not to be' ^seemed forced U've been in the sun too long Ur bein out-done an out-shone it's ur shitty textee verse thats all wrong ^weak punch again.... If i lose its corruption U must be registered more times than one now bare wiv me im nearly done ^didnt hit,,, be more direct Now don't go uppin Cuz if u do then u've made a mistake it should be ur wrists that u cuttin ^weak closer... it should be nice and strong, to finish things up... all in all.... Ak takes this one, better worddplay, structure and harder hitting punches..... vote=Ak |
uppin............................................. .................................................. ........
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A.K mixa took this one,
ak, you had some nice punches, overall your verse was pretty weak, but you came with some nice concepts an some played concepts, your complexity varied throughout the battle, your punches didn't really hit hard!! MuSick, damn their wasn't really anything in your verse that stood out, not really any direct hard hitting punches, i would say no complexity, but it is the lowest point of simplicity, ou just need to elvate read battles, an tutorials, an you will get better!! vote AkMixa a better verse, with harder hitting punches!! |
Im feelin Musick verse better it had a better flow to it and it felt like it came natural as i read it.
One Vote For Musick. |
ak got this shit by a mile is shit was complex and had good punches along with flow..musik ur shit was streched and had poor flow and ur strucyture was terrible..
vote ak plz drop an honest vote on this http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111122 |
uppin for votes and feedback.......................................... .....com'n damnitt
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