Barz of Entrapment
 

fucka rhyme...I'ma spit a fuckin' clip at ya mind...
I hand out a buck 50 for free while y'all still sellin' nickelz and dimez...
bring ya crew...when I'm grippin' the nine...
I'll fuck ya back up like puttin' my fuckin' dick in ya spine...
I'm the type to go up to ya girl to prove that you can rape the willin'...
and y'all can watch me advertise euthinasia like Save The Children...
I ain't the villain just because I'm spreadin' hatred to kidz...
ya face will be slit when my razor is gripped...
if you claim ya ass is grimy then you should wipe it after takin' a shit...
ya fake when ya spit so I guess you real when you swallow...
today you ain't shit and still ain't nobody gonna feel you tomorrow...
I ain't feelin' ya sorrow cause you talk more shit than assholez...
and ya girl'z cunt's like a blunt...I take 2 hits and pass (ho!!!!!!)

uppin'...

well since this is bein slept on, i'll drop some feedback

The rhyming was realy good, really diggin the flow, that was coo, the vocab was good, i liked how you tried to rhyme every word kinda, that was pretty sweet. nice drop shouldn't be gettin slept on.....coulda been a bit longer tho, but that coo

keep it real

You know what, this really surprized me. Because hardly anyone can rap like this anymore on this site, and pull it off nice. I liked the gangsta put in this bitch. I can tell you around some shit. Just from how I be freestylen and shit, just like that, lol. It was nice, there was a consistant flow, and a great rhyme scheme. Its not made to be something incredable emotional. its made to intertain. good job...

I ain't feelin' ya sorrow cause you talk more shit than assholez...
and ya girl'z cunt's like a blunt...I take 2 hits and pass (ho!!!!!!)

^ I was feeling that line, nice work... LOL ^