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:) vs FairInHeight
ok 10 lines.. no hate votes.. gazeebo cant vote.. you spit first rhymes due 20 minutes after we both check in
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sry for freepost but i wouldnt do that
our beef is our beef...no need to bring it over to another battle dont wry bout that dawg...that aint fair if i would do that |
dude your just a NET PUNK
ill stomp your ass to a DEAD STUMP leave your NECK CRUNCHED, then smash your heart so hard youll be sportin CHEST LUMPS you see the smiles in my sig.. faggot thats exactly how your mother GETS HUMPED and speakin of your mother.. the hoes got some UNPROPORTIONAL KIDS faggot you look like a god damn ABORTION THAT LIVED son youll NEVER DATE, cuz your grill looks like its just been through a SHREDDERS BASE compared to you.. the offspring of michael jackson and apes would result in a BETTER FACE i mean i aint ever seen a dude as wack ass you thats SPIT THIS LONG your damn battle verses are like public toilets.. they always get SHITTED ON |
tearz beat opens
funeral singing starts and ends. your raps to me, are 50's musicals, old and worn out, as witches crusibles/ ya name's smile, the shit ain't suitable, ya won't be smilin when this ya funural/ scared of me i don't wannab havin to shout, all i wanna do is battle it out/ winnin over me, that's a capital doubt, you the dead guy pac n face was rappin about/ this bitch gon choke, when he hit in da rib, i make ill multis, like tripplet kids/ momma diss in ya sig, i got missiles for pigs, i make sharp shots, not a brissle get's skid/ this a world war, so yo fuck a riot, your battleverse'll get's dubbed in silence/ you'll lose your phatness, yo chubby, quiet, I'll make you lightweight, like a subway diet/ i'll hex your career and your litter verse wit no witty words, i'm spitting curse/ wreck your burial sending a spinning herse, rip your face off and wipe it on a hippie shirt/ |
uppin, i gotta fix up the structure
tearz beat opens funeral singing starts and ends. your raps to me, are 50's musicals, old and worn out, as witches crusibles/ ya name's smile, the shit ain't suitable, ya won't be smilin when this ya funural/ scared of me i don't wannab havin to shout, all i wanna do is battle it out/ winnin over me, that's a capital doubt, you the dead guy pac n face was rappin about/ this bitch gon choke, when he hit in da rib, i make ill multis, like tripplet kids/ momma diss in ya sig, i got missiles for pigs, i make sharp shots, not a brissle get's skid/ this a world war, so yo fuck a riot, your battleverse'll get's dubbed in silence/ you'll lose your phatness, yo chubby, quiet, I'll make you lightweight, like a subway diet/ i'll hex your career and your litter verse wit no witty words, i'm spitting curse/ wreck your burial sending a spinning herse, rip your face off and wipe it on a hippie shirt/ |
im gonna have to give this one to faireinhight he had overall better punches smiley i liked your flow and creativity but still have to give this one to faireinhight close battle though.........
vote Fairinhight sorry i cant poll vote can you take a look at my battle: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110557 |
fuck that.. uppin for real votes shit wasnt even explained at all.. and i said 10 lines not 20 mothafucka
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dude your just a NET PUNK
ill stomp your ass to a DEAD STUMP leave your NECK CRUNCHED, then smash your heart so hard youll be sportin CHEST LUMPS you see the smiles in my sig.. faggot thats exactly how your mother GETS HUMPED **At first flow was off but den it picked up......okay punch** and speakin of your mother.. the hoes got some UNPROPORTIONAL KIDS faggot you look like a god damn ABORTION THAT LIVED son youll NEVER DATE, cuz your grill looks like its just been through a SHREDDERS BASE compared to you.. the offspring of michael jackson and apes would result in a BETTER FACE **OOOOOOO nice ass punches here......shyt good shyt.....im still laughin*** i mean i aint ever seen a dude as wack ass you thats SPIT THIS LONG your damn battle verses are like public toilets.. they always get SHITTED ON **also nice punch but the shitted on lines are gettin played out bu tu made it work** overall: good shyt, nice punches, sum multis, wat was up wit dat structure???????? your raps to me, are 50's musicals, old and worn out, as witches crusibles/ ya name's smile, the shit ain't suitable, ya won't be smilin when this ya funural/ **good hard punches...great use of mulitiples** scared of me i don't wannab havin to shout, all i wanna do is battle it out/ winnin over me, that's a capital doubt, you the dead guy pac n face was rappin about/ **k good but not makin dat much sense, again good use of multis** this bitch gon choke, when he hit in da rib, i make ill multis, like tripplet kids/ momma diss in ya sig, i got missiles for pigs, i make sharp shots, not a brissle get's skid/ **like da shyt about trpplets but da last line killed it.....good way of talkin about ur self though*** this a world war, so yo fuck a riot, your battleverse'll get's dubbed in silence/ you'll lose your phatness, yo chubby, quiet, I'll make you lightweight, like a subway diet/ **lol ill ass punches, again with the multis*** i'll hex your career and your litter verse wit no witty words, i'm spitting curse/ wreck your burial sending a spinning herse, rip your face off and wipe it on a hippie shirt/ **aiight good use of multis, dat would be a good line but not a good closere*** overall=good shyt, great use of multis and nice punches dis was a very good battle, so to decide da winner u have to find out who messes up more and it was faininheight with the 4th bar about pigs and shyt...dat killed it... besides dat good ass battle........I'm da head recruiter for dynasty soldiers and i suggest that u 2 try out for it..... vote= smiley aka :-) dis is da last time im uppin dis battle its been slept on for about a week!!!! http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109267 |
hey yo we goin up this shit again.................
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Pretty close battle, I liked FairInHeight's style, but punches weren't as effective
Punches: Smiley Wordplay: Neither Multis: Fair Personals: Tie Opener: Smiley Closer: Tie Vote - Smiley faggot you look like a god damn ABORTION THAT LIVED Best line, I thouhgt it was funny Return the favor in my sig, with an honest vote Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom |
dude your just a NET PUNK
ill stomp your ass to a DEAD STUMP leave your NECK CRUNCHED, then smash your heart so hard youll be sportin CHEST LUMPS you see the smiles in my sig.. faggot thats exactly how your mother GETS HUMPED and speakin of your mother.. the hoes got some UNPROPORTIONAL KIDS faggot you look like a god damn ABORTION THAT LIVED son youll NEVER DATE, cuz your grill looks like its just been through a SHREDDERS BASE compared to you.. the offspring of michael jackson and apes would result in a BETTER FACE i mean i aint ever seen a dude as wack ass you thats SPIT THIS LONG your damn battle verses are like public toilets.. they always get SHITTED ON __________________________________________________ __ structure was horrible and punches were pretty good decent personals but yer opener was whack finished strong at the end and shit but 7/10 __________________________________________________ _____ your raps to me, are 50's musicals, old and worn out, as witches crusibles/ ya name's smile, the shit ain't suitable, ya won't be smilin when this ya funural/ scared of me i don't wannab havin to shout, all i wanna do is battle it out/ winnin over me, that's a capital doubt, you the dead guy pac n face was rappin about/ this bitch gon choke, when he hit in da rib, i make ill multis, like tripplet kids/ momma diss in ya sig, i got missiles for pigs, i make sharp shots, not a brissle get's skid/ this a world war, so yo fuck a riot, your battleverse'll get's dubbed in silence/ you'll lose your phatness, yo chubby, quiet, I'll make you lightweight, like a subway diet/ i'll hex your career and your litter verse wit no witty words, i'm spitting curse/ wreck your burial sending a spinning herse, rip your face off and wipe it on a hippie shirt/ __________________________________________________ ______ pretty whack idk yer punches and personals were horribly directed flow was on but homie punches wins battles so you lost but 7/10 __________________________________________________ _ vote/:) for having better directed punches and personals this was pretty mucha tie and shit but :) barely pulled this off i would say youd be lucky to win this battle yo doggs hit my links up in my sig and return the favor ok |
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