My Lyfe [part 1]
 

We live in a bent world with warped philosophies
But this aint a lent rhyme about social atrocities
Cos I aint Socrates, I don’t study the world today
I talk about the direct living designated to my way
Yes… there’s families afraid, but it don’t affect me
So why worry about others when my life isn’t free
Im not content to be, another case stud-E… citizen 1E
That’s my district… but it aint me… im grade A
I aint rump…. im here to stay, like im caught on play
Only not repetitive cos my sedative varies by day
1-minute im annulled… the next on a route to stray
Try to delay but the maze thickens… so lose my place
Cos the human race is literal and we all want to finish
And diminish the rest that contest ya… try’na win it
Ya can bin it… cos I refuse(refuge) to live within a bubble
I burst it cos im porous so absorb all the trouble
Cos Im double six on the dice, half the high, rolling twins
On a binge to consume most things, to the minge
On the fringe of another plane… where the insane dwell
Yes… the domain where im heading is hotter than hell
Cos it’s the start of a life sliced up… so will it end well?

I liked the wordplay in this alot, You had some clever rhyming schemes, Vocab couldve been better but it got the point across ...decent drop
7/10

dopeness...Dev is becoming doper and doper everyday...which is scary..cause you always putting out some dope shit!!!!

y am i not surprised that this was a classic?

cos i am Dope......lol... my middle name is 'ounce'.......

sleepin?,,,

Alright man, this was another dope piece, it seems like all your stuff I read is great, I can never see anything wrong with your stuff, and it seems like your always elevating. Thanks for replying to my stuff also, it seems like a lot of vets won't comment or vote on newer member stuff, it's good to see one that does. Thanks again.

You Know I Left Thinking I Would Come Back To Everyone Falling Off But Dev You Slap Me In The Face With Your Constant Elivation.this Was A Good Read I Cant Say There Was A Point Where Interest Was Lost Or Where I Was Dissapointed.....good Drop

thnx Perfect........ this collab is gonna be ill......

its fucking hard these days to get some decent feed.....

uppin...... fuck!

--[Flow]---
Got the impression that it is written to a slow type paced beat, the flow was nice..some dope internals...

"We live in a bent world with warped philosophies
But this aint a lent rhyme about social atrocities
Cos I aint Socrates" - reminds me alot of my own style..lol...so dope for that :)

--[Vocab]--
Vocab was nice, you used it well, used it constructivly n' effieciently, wasn;t overused and at the same type it wasn't lacking anywhere, some brutal wordplay too:

"Cos Im double six on the dice, half the high, rolling twins"

--[Concept]--
Had some good relative stuff here, you made it personal to yourself which i liked, got a sense of enclosedness [spelling?] in this piece...maybe i'm way off but meh...lol

--[Overall]--
will look forward to Part 2 mos def...you are constantly elevatin', you have a hella alot of potential...4/5 - deserved!

Dope Piece Dev. . Everything There. . Flow, Wordplay, Vocab, Meta's, You Jus Cruisin On These OM's Ain't You. . I'm Startin To Get Like How I Am With Penskills, I'm Expectin' No Less Than Dope. . Time To Go Read Part 2. . Which I'll Do Later, Gotta Get Some Food. . Dope Piece Man, Pz.

Cos Im double six on the dice, half the high, rolling twins
^ ^ Ill. . Insanely Ill.