Chronicclown vs lilrenegade89
 

check then spit 30 min u got 20 min to check in or u dQ ed

IGHT YO/
CHECK IT/
TA BEAT CHRONICCLOWN/
U NEED A LOTTA LUCK/
LIKE WHEN VANILLA ICE WAS IN HIS PRIME STIL U GON SUCK/
LIKE SADDAM SILENTLY YOU'LL SURRENDER/
YA STYLE IS LIMBER/
ITS IMPOSSIBLE TO ME/
LIKE WARM WEATHER IN DECEMBER/
KIDNAP LILRENEGADE FROM THIS MENTAL WARD/
KNOCK SOME SINCE INTO HIM WIT A TWO BY FOUR/
WIT NINE INCH NAILS/
POKIN THROUGH THE BOARD/
THIS LIL BITCH HAS BEEN OFFICALLY WHORED/
i NEED TO PULL OUT THE GLOCK/
AND HAVE SOMEONE SHOT DIS BITCH DEAD/
YOU PUT SIX FEET DEEP NIGGA YOU BE DEAD/
CHOKE YOU OUT WIT A PHONE CORD/
AND BANG YO HEAD AGAINST THE WALL/
I COULD SNAP YO NECK FASTER WIT PHONE CORD/
THEN U CAN MAKE A COLLECT CALL/
TRY TA HIT 911/
BUT I ALREADY BROKE YO FINGERS/
YO YOU RAP YO RHYMESLIKE U WAS JA RULES BACK UP SINGER/


IGHT SPIT

Ight Dawg I Spit My Shit Do Yo Verse And People Start To Vote

dis clown neva fuckin been on chronic
this little bitch, run from weed so fast u should call him sonic!/
knuckles or tails all his ryhmes gunna fail../
dis mutha fucker spit so slow it's like 2 words pa hour./
rite now he probally raisin his hand screamin white power../
im just sitten here waitin for dis panzy ta flower//
for this rap im probally gunna wait for an hour/
ill take ur fuckin fone cord n hang ya from a tower/
i spit my ryhmes a hundred miles a hour/
what u talkin bout u ain't got the balls ta pull out a glock/
i don't even think ya bitch ass has a fuckin cock/
im bout ta pump a slug in dis homo thug/
all he want from me a kiss n a hug/
a yo da only g u b is a fukin gay bo/
wait all deez ppl neve seen a homo /
b u better watch out ima bout ta blow a gasket/
if i do peeps find u layin in a casket/
bitch i knew ya ass was gunna fail/
so y don't u go play suckie suckie with sonic n tails/

uppin #1

Ight Ya'll Start To Vote.. And Vote Honestly Well Ya'll Priobably Will Ne Wayz.

upppin
 

uppin#2 comon ppl vote please

what a very wack battle....typical and herbish..still lil renegade took it in every category.....and CC you need to fix ur damn format....it sucks...you both need that lovely word called...ELEVATION.....yes...its required..\\

v/lil R.

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damn... I've seen some shitty battles but this is the moldy frosting on a burnt cake...
Chronicclown's verse was wack as fuck, so bad it wouldn't even be able to get him into the WEC... Plus his flow was way the fuck of anything
lilrenegade sucked too but his had a trace of meta's and a flow...
VOTE-Lil' Renegade 89...
Elevate motha fuckas

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ightt LIL was alittle better and has shown some elevation...but needs a little work on structure and stronger punches
flow:LIL
punches:LIL
structuer:both need work
wordplay:both need alot of work but LIL had alittle better wordplay
my vote-lilrenegade89

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Uppin. We Need Votes. Well I Need Votes. Lol. So Vote And Holla Atcha Boi Wit Anything I Can Change On My Rhymes

uppin

Yo that was one of the worst rhymes i've ever heard no question battle goes to LilRenegade

if i can vote, id give it to Renegade, his flow was consistant.
For the most part a weak battle, not that hard of punches.
My vote: Rene89

ya'l r a bunch of fuckin dickriders. what the fuck ever