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Xx_Meks_xX 01-29-04 10:21 PM

Corrupted Visions : Open Mic/ High Class Diss
 
OPEN MIC
If the world was perfect things would be equal
But visions are twisted misconvcieved & evil
Everybody has items they want, uncontollable evny .....
Go out and rob other people' shit leavin some one else empty
It's a shame we feed on on animals but fuck it slaughter .. ..
Every cow right now so it's there for my Mcdonald's order
If it were up to me ...... I wish we could all walk on water.....
Immortality for those werthy & now lifes prolonged much longer
But on the mIc?........you gotta come stronger lines like saunas ...
Rhymes thats honest...write 10 tracks a day cause the label's ON US
But I keep from tarnished, so clean cut garunteed fresh to stay
So I don't imitate & front wit my wordplay, I stand behind what I say
No mistakes today, get the perfect score in the untouched when I play
I wish the youth knew growin up will only get harder, so get smarter!
(turning into the high class diss)
Unless ur blessed and content wit goin no farther, like havin rich father
I say fuck'a silver spoon my mom told me about cows jumpin moons
Now I eat them shits as food an ur dad owns the company dood!!!
So what If you were in my shoes..........?
Face cringes and winces at the lips first taste of the booze
He thinks it's rude!(lol)..........Next he tellin me it's true......
If I was a business man my type would be crewd an shrewd
People said Meks lacks vocab in some of his open mics?
My linguistic skill are sharp enough to cut thru Ginsu knifes
Put that muzzle on your mouth and you aint comin through the wire
Not even Kayne West could produce a beat for you to sound like Fire
The whole site hates you ...... it's true we all want you gone
When I see you reply to this I'll be like "Damn He's STILL on?"
Havent seen you around lately cause you afraid of the boogy man
Wack actor! ur voice belong on the Buzz Light Year and Woody jam
But you aint got a freind in me, not rb, not even your own mommy
So go tell Tommy...cuz HilFiger a way so that you never find me
This is clever timing.........I keyed this in like a half hour no lying
If we battled I'd give you a day to write and you'd still whining
Crying, is what got you most of your wins, i'd toast you an ya freinds
Your whole entarauge will fall victim of sabatoge your at your end
I'll use mind control and telekenesis, turn ever1 against you
Even your fuckin concience will say something you offend you!

It's over and done with cuz you'll only respond with dumb wit
Or pre write some shit, but for me still a High Class Consumption

High Class 01-29-04 10:34 PM

^ Your Wack, Please tell me thats not all you got....
So do you want a battle? Or should I embarress you with a diss???
You choose, its up to you. ^

Xx_Meks_xX 01-29-04 10:40 PM

^of course its not all i got.....im just bent off zannies..... an yer name popped up in my head........it's not THAT serious.................but if you wanna battle get me
on

-technician- tommorow or suttin......calll me out or suttin tommorow

Ambitious 01-30-04 11:03 AM

uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp ppppppppppppp

WORD~PERFECT 01-30-04 12:57 PM

As A Verse It Was Hott As A Diss It Lacked. You Tried To Attack Personal But The Dissess Carried No Real Hit......you Got Talent But Next Time Drop The Zanies And Thing Anger.

Ambitious 01-31-04 05:06 PM

up.

southsideloco 01-31-04 05:17 PM

Quote:
As A Verse It Was Hott As A Diss It Lacked. You Tried To Attack Personal But The Dissess Carried No Real Hit......you Got Talent But Next Time Drop The Zanies And Thing Anger


basically evrything W.P said.........u got talent n u usin it,but dont b tryin to diss or else u gonna head up in battles u prolly wont even know, ne wayz like th drop as a regular drop not as a diss or bitch slap call out..keep doin ur thang tho homie

Peace
:thumbup:
please return the favor n hit up "shinin light in ur darkness"

-Smoke- 01-31-04 07:37 PM

was feelin the first part the most...lacked as a diss...
flow was obviously there...showed potential...
part before it turned diss was hot...

favorite line...
"If it were up to me ...... I wish we could all walk on water.....
Immortality for those werthy & now lifes prolonged much longer"

keep flowin...


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