Joker VS CarsonjetX2
 

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dis aircrafts on a suicide route like them planes that hit them towers
Cut his neck why he’s in tha air now carson’s creatin blood showers
This nigga whack…changin his name cause he had around 60 losses
niggaz punches aint hittin..so like mortal kombat this win is flawless
Carsonjet From boston…its bout to be another massacre in tha makin
This nigga will be dead….this aint no makaveli this cat wont be fakin
Usin some extra eyes in his avy..tryin to improve his imparred vision
My punches hit jet wit precision..joker win’n by KO is the final decision
Battlin newbies tryna get his record up so he can finally get some respect
This nigga is old as dirt he can neva be hard even viagra cant get’em to erect

Hey yo...

Joker, Fuk ur sig an ur Hip-Hop Remix..
Ima rip Ur thread like a retarded seamstress
Your meaningless, dawg your the butt of all jokes
U define what it is to serve L's from head choke's...
Wit out IJL your broke, your lucky Xtreme likes u..
ILLunatic was a Dick ride win, an U know that shits true..
We kno your wak, joke...u already gave Hip-Hip a new look
12-1?Vet wise? no...You just got the anal booked...
Thinkin your tight...Lol, maybe if ur sportin tighty whiteys
It's pathetic....Half of RB knows that ur a righty..

This nigga is old as dirt he can neva be hard even viagra cant get’em to erect
jus so we all know....I'm 19....

w/e dawg i was here when u had ya otha name and you
always got cracked on fo ya age so stfu and quit tryna sway
votes....

^ Wasn't needed...

Carson takes most caterorys.. punches were effective, coming from a personal point of view in each bar more or less..
Structure was tight, short and sharp (tho too short at times).. opener was real nice...
Basically a tight verse...
Joker had some okay punches, but executed them all wrong...
Slightly stretched lines at times and poor vocab.. a few played concepts also.. Mortal Combat.. two towers.. etc.. they coulda worked if used well, in a more witty scenario but as it was the verse was average.. personal attempts which was tight, but otherwise an easy win for Carson..

Vote - CarsonJetx2

Return the favour, I need just one more vote - http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110472

Hmm..first of all...joker ya lines are too long
throws off tha flow...not that much creativity
from you..you came with viagra/hard..mortal kombat
Said that you were gonna KO him
need be a lil more orignal..ya jet lines were played
Liked ya massacre line though

Carson you had a great opener..semstress was good
pretty solid verse...except tha closer..wasn't feeling that one
nice flow...good personals..although i think tha joke/joker punches
are a lil played now..but good wordplay..like ya opener for example

so

v/ Carson

Ight
Punches- Both Came hard, Joker u had a couple good punches(the 60 losses)
Carson just hit harder and came much cleaner, Joker u couldve worded your punches better so they were cleaner.
Structure-Joker really didin't have one..no punctuation...nuttin..Carsons structure was tight,Matched flow perfectly.......
Flow-Nice flow by both, but carsons was just cleaner,because jokers wasn't very well structured it kinda brought his flow down...it wasn't on track..
Wordplay- Nice wordplay used by both, good creativy...Pretty much a tie for wordplay
personals-Both came hard w/ personal, Jokers were actually more humerous, but again cuz of the bad structure and wording it wasn't better then carsons,,Carson came quite basic actually, but still hit hard..Personal Were a tie

A good Battle....No Beef

V/ Carsonjetx2

Honestly judge and vote on this Please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110833

Joker got this in my eyes he had more personals
and better hard hitting punches....


carson u came ight you punches was kinda weak
ansd your personals..well some was lies so thats wasnt workin..


vote:joker

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom

joker voted for himself....
What an idiot...just gave away your alias

wtf are u talkin bout dawg...aol ips are tha same nigga...
so if u really think i voted for my self....have a mod run
an ip check..

hmm..johnny wattz disappeared about tha same time you came around
then he comes out of nowhere and votes for you with tha same ip's
and don't get on a different computer to try and cover it up

wise ways get off carsons dick...this aint even ya battle..
so why tha fuck u freepostin...u fuckin fag

Dont worry it's bein done right now