.:FreemaN:. Vs ReMiXx
 

man wy dont the utha nigga show up and get down on this battle

Aaight. Checkin In. I'm In ;) I'll Post Mine Soon As Possible.

I Never Decline Rhymes Set Back In Aztec Times/
Bite Lines? My Artistic Crimes Will Expand Your Mind/
Staggering Blind, My Waterfall Flow Is Fine/
Here's a Lesson For You Freeman I Call It Devine/
Who Needs To Text Battle? I Can Beat You In Style/
Give You Some Punchlines That Will Even Make Your Mom Smile/
I Don't Hate I'm Just Here To Create New Artistic Rhymes That Illuminate/
I Devastate An Situation That You Think You Can Throw At Me/
Here's a Double Dose of Flow Enhancing Ecstacy/
Freeman Be An MC But For Now We're Just Enemies/
Why You Gotta Envy Me? Because I Can See Right Through You/
Never Bite My Steady Lines, If You Be Nice I'll Give Them Too You/

:) Be Gentle

yo this battle was aight but can
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110581

freeman got some awesome punches on this newby. it wasnt to bad, but he hadnt much punches,anyway flow ok, even better than freeman, but my votes goes to freeman
This bitch looked like he was concentratin wiv all his might
Face screwed up and redden'd...
... then he realized his collar was too tight
lol, really good lines freeman

em... sorry for this but i forgot to
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...d.php?p=1141813

Freeman got this 1......y????his punches were beyond extreme in this lol........they were dope.......remixx ur shit was aight u had a very nice flow but i tink u concentrated on that 2 much and not on ur opponent.........personals from both were aight........freeman finished remixx of wit 1 funny ass dope finisha.....on this 1 ma vote goes 2 freeman

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Freeman gets my vote because his content and structure and especially punchlines were straight dope LOL makin me cry in tears while laughing at remix's ass. well there ain't to much to say except it was straight dope and keep elevating alright man.

Your punches are about as heavy as hittin me wiv a tissue
My plan is to send you ass packin...
... aint no-one gona miss you

Remixx was straight doing some of it up but wasn't as dope as Freeman not even by a hair. some of your lines were sick but didn't even rhyme completely which threw me off a bit but overall excellent for a Newb. Focus and ya structure and make all your lines end rhyme at least, but i'm very impressed wit this guy.

Who Needs To Text Battle? I Can Beat You In Style/
Give You Some Punchlines That Will Even Make Your Mom Smile/

vote=Freeman

hit my battle up nigga to get them closed playa, thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109978
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110451

V/ Freeman

Freeman was content during this battle...he came wit some good punches and some funny ones...his wordplay was wasnt bad either. his verse was far from basic...he kept solid wit his struct and flowed through out the whole entire verse...he had a good amount of creativity and it added to make his verse better...your personals were decent and some good but if you made them more complex, well ya verse would be much better as well.

Remixx, you didnt come as well as i expected in this battle, some of your lines were ok but your rhyme scheme and what words you rhymed threw it off....try to improve on that since it is important. your punches were decent, but alot just made u look good and didnt really connect well..they just stated things and didnt hit em...try to focus on dissing him, just write out lines and dont make em rhyme, and then when u got your punches and ideas written down you can go back and edit them and re-word so that they rhyme...your structure was alright but you could drop the / at the end of the line and even out ya lines too...

freeman got it for me. his punches were very nice indeed. remix didn't have enough real punches, and just concentrated on himself too much. what he said wasn't too bad, he just lacked the focus nescessary. if he'd had good punches he might have got it, but they just weren;t there. his flow was nicer and he had nice use of multis. but he lacked the needed punch in this one. pity really. good attempt though. i'm sure he'll be capable of better with practice. freeman gets it though i'm afriad.

forgot to say, can somebody vote on the battle in my sig? getting very little interest....

Free,ma took this battle..........y.........

flow-freeman urs needs a lil bit of work on in this depart,emt but remixx urs was gd and i liked it...........

Punches-remixx in this u came hard but i dont think you were expectin free 2 cum bk as he did......if it was n e other newbie u wud of won in my eyes but it think freemna was better....

Personals- personals were from both were ok but nothing special

Stucture-I felt both structures were ok and there isnt really much work needed in this department

alltogether i wud say freeman took this as he was just overall better hear......remixx ur verse was good but i thought u concentrated 2 much on ur flow than cumin with a better verse........

my vote freeman