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TheUnderRated 01-30-04 07:06 PM

TheUnderRated vs. puertoricanelly
 
10-12
blindspits
30-45 minutes
no crew/hate/dr
checkin

TheUnderRated 01-30-04 07:12 PM

i set it up son don't be scurred.......heheheh that was hilarious

puertoricanelly 01-30-04 07:24 PM

im here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !

TheUnderRated 01-30-04 07:26 PM

word good luck keyin now..................................

puertoricanelly 01-30-04 07:52 PM

im givin you offerings ta leave and you betta accept um, or ill be makin ya pay when i pull miracles outcha rectum/yo name iz THEUNDERATED cuz yo ass aint shit,like gasoline and a lighter ill leave yo ass lit/this battle is over and ima blast you like jam master jay, i just insulted your reason for rappin now you dont know what ta say/you say we need 10-12 lines ta finish a battle,but ive only said 5 and your runnin on your horse and sattle/but its ok take off while you can, because id leave you special ed like the retard off I AM SAM/im a leave you bleedin like a offering in biblical times, not even jesus could save you or your wack ass rhymes.

TheUnderRated 01-30-04 07:54 PM

I Got to the battle late this kid was already knocked out...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110987
^didn't wanna beat a retard so i made sure he could count...
this kids reekin so i'm gonna show him la puerta....(the door)
second i started speakin this kid was left la muerta...(dead)
feel bad me and this kid...i coulda had a new friend...
gotta give him his first merkin..no wait that was blend!!!!
kid couldn't serve me if i employed him as my personal maid...
the beatin fits the name though your left....with a bandaid......
coughin and weezin you havin trouble spitting tonight...
cause i'm so highly elevated....you need on a breath right...
needin oxygen but i'll get you a tank of No2...
that way everyone is laughin with instead of at you.......

Clownin Bitch....ArsonIll

TheUnderRated 01-30-04 07:58 PM

soy blanco pero yo hablo espanol......uppin estes para uno!!!!!!!!!

EyI-SyTeZ 01-30-04 08:16 PM

Fuck a breakdown

TheUnderRated got this, he beat P in every category. P's verse was simple and didn't pack any punch, on the other hand TUR came wit some nice punches, personals, and an OK wordplay. Nice try to both though.

The Jett 01-30-04 08:19 PM

UNder merk'd this kid....
puerto plant a seed an grow a structure....please
Under had alot better punches and great meti4's...
I liked the meurta line, good thinkin with the spanish...
personal and hard hittin....

easy vote- Under....
puerto...read more of my battles.....and u'll get better
(wow....how cocky can i get?)

EyI-SyTeZ 01-30-04 08:23 PM

Breakdown

Punches: TheUnderRated
Wordplay: TheUnderRated
Meta’s: TheUnderRated
Creativity: TheUnderRated
Personals: Neither
Flow: TheUnderRated
Multi’s: TheUnderRated

Vote: TheUnderRated

TheUnderRated won this when P dropped his verse. He had harder punches, wordplay, and just an overall better verse.


Sorry

TheUnderRated 01-30-04 08:48 PM

word thanx for the feedback guys uppin this xxxxxxxxxxx22222222222222 lets get the votes adn get it it closed peace leave links and decent votes....

M.C. Shadow 13 01-30-04 08:57 PM

the under rated won this because he had o.k. puches
and the mix of spanish and english made his verse
greater than the utha fu

Dev 01-31-04 05:56 AM

well this was a pretty one sided battle.... the consistency has to go to Under, it was structured far better, much better feel to the verse, also the punches hit with more strength, with some nice personals... puerto, took a very noob approach.... you need to evelate, ya had some punches, but not on the same level..... so vote=Under

VanIllabymidnite 01-31-04 07:02 AM

This is how I saw this

Flow=Under, just from the structural stand point he had this won, but it also flowed better anyway.

Punches=Under, he had much harder hitting punches.

Personals=tie, neither really had any personals.

Vocab=Under, he even went bi-lingual.

Over all=Under, he took almost every catagorie.


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