Colors..
 

..Colors..

An Abundance of, Lively, Colored Eye of Mine
Racism- We wish the world stayed Color Blind
Rainbows of Bent Light, Brightening our Day
Rainbows represent..So people Hate on Gays
Yes, We live in a colorful world, We take Granted
But if We had a Dog's Eyes....
Would we show love to our Advantage?
Or Maybe a hawk's eye, So we can See Clear
Would we Love it the same, if it'd one Day...
Disappear?
Imagine the world Painted in Dorothy's Kansas
Imagine if Van Goh Had but Two Colors on His Canvas
Could that visit to the Oriental, Make any difference?
If they didn't teach him the use of Bright Colors..
If they were not even in existense?
We take so much for granted, Yet Make the world Special
You want a Pigment of Color, in Your Retinal's Center
The world...As plain as the black ink on your Papers..
The things You take For granted Make Special..
The things That You Savor..

Really Ill Piece Here Skiddz. . Topical I See. . You Did A Great Job With Descriptions And Your Imagery About The Problems Was Up To Par. . Flow Was Good, Like The Way You Structured. . The Little Pauses Between Some Rhymes Helped The Flow. . I'm Lookin' Out For More From You. . Pz.

An Abundance of, Lively, Colored Eye of Mine
Racism- We wish the world stayed Color Blind
Rainbows of Bent Light, Brightening our Day
Rainbows represent..So people Hate on Gays
^ ^ Dope. . This Is What I Meant By Imagery On The Problems. . Created The Picture Of Rainbows In My Head And Gays. . Lol. . No Hate On Gays Tho.



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coolio..uppin on some feed..

dope..great imagery..and great content..very discriptive with your words...this was short and sweet~~~very nice~~~(skiddz tried to kill me!)

the thing that stood out in this was how descriptive it was.... and not over played.... it was short, but ya got alot into it..... and it flowed pretty good....yeah.. good little drop.....

yay..They Like it..they really like it!!

Wow...this was very descriptive..i've never seen this topic done before...very creative...i like the flow...and the picture you created...good multies and metas and so on...good work...it was a good read

dope pice..nice flow...nice vocab..nice structure..
nice punches....7.5/10