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Jea-Guttah 01-30-04 08:39 PM

Performance - yes sir
 
Poker these niggas got em Folding With Ya
I got all these Kats In My Hand like Holding Wiskers
Jea Dropping Bars like Stolen Snickers
Do a Drive By On ya Frame like im Rolling Pictures
Any nigga,i'll Rip..got mad for the Fourth time wanna see how the Fifth Do
Nothing to be fucked with like the game i Twist Dudes
I wrote it,no nigga dumb enuff to Appoarch This
Cause i Hit em hard and smoke'd up like Roaches
Got em drowning in my Bars like being lost in the Ocean
I got skills in definintion fuck Mistakes im rappin on Purpose
Never scared to battle anyone wanna i'll show you what hurt is
Its like Peeling off your Skin to the meat and im jus Scratching the Surface
Emcee's is confused,it must be off the head to be a key not a Written One
I would of thought that rappers Sprint for a leavin cause they Missions Run
My name Jea-Guttah for a reason cuz rhymes is back to back til the Clip is Done
Listen son, i aim to please no hard currents these lames a breeze
Readin my rhymes is like eating a slurpee fast got ya brain on freeze
Skills are endless they'll neva go away jus incase lemme tap wood
Fuck knockin on trees i dont need shit cause yea im that good



- Hottest Thing Out - Yes Sir..

FormulaMC 01-30-04 09:03 PM

Actually, This Wasn't Half Bad. . Some Nice Lines. . Albeit Played Ones. . Flow Suffered From The Stretched Bars In The Middle. . Work On Evening Things Out Or Inserting Periods Like I Do For Pauses So The Flow Is Still Seen And Not Lost. . Decent Vocab. . Some Good Multi's. . Maybe More Multi's Next Piece To Help On Flow. . Structure Was Fucked Because Of The Middle Of This Piece. . Topic Of Self Proclaimation/Bragging Is Played, But This Is Your First Drop And You Were Making A Statement. . And Shit Was Decent. . Keep Droppin Man, Only Room For Improvement. Pz.

Poker these niggas got em Folding With Ya
I got all these Kats In My Hand like Holding Wiskers
Jea Dropping Bars like Stolen Snickers
Do a Drive By On ya Frame like im Rolling Pictures
^ ^ Pretty Good Way To Open Up, My Fave Lines Of This Drop. . Even Tho All Lines Are Played, Shit Flowed Good, Shoulda Kept This Tempo The Whole Time.


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111016
^ ^ Hit It Up, Appreciate It.

Jea-Guttah 01-30-04 09:05 PM

Thanks for the information - i honestly didn't have my head all the way into !
but check out my next post - shit gonna be HOTT

lol i am 50 times better than what i spitted up there


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