Aisle Vs Feeble
 

20 lines.
Due tonite or tomorrow
Word.

in. Aisle i have a basketball game tonight at 8. Im not really sure whats happening after that... If im not back tonight don't drop & we can drop tomorrow. Or you can drop tonight even if im away :)

Wow talk about overrated! You gotta be kidding

Well you must get a lot of practice, doing it for a living!^
Come on you're decent at best, I'm givin' you props next
You're wack as fuck........
But that'd be the biggest compliment you'll ever get!
Last time you fed to win, not happenin again, dork
Told em' to eat my dust, so he got out a knife n' fork!
Damn right your gettin' whored, good, your far from it
Only reason you got on Deja Vu, was b/c you started it!
Dukes ya hardly sick, n' ya wonderin' why ya hands hurt?
You kept questionin' me, n' found out 'violence is the answer'
This punk's set up to lose, kid my rhymes are toxic
While yours are 100% recycled, like fuckin' cereal boxes
Quit ya bickerin dude, before you get smoked like hickory
Most wack verses give me headaches, yours give me victory

We agreed on AIM for 14-16 lines, I posted 16, good luck bro.

(feeble speaking) : i edited in the percent sign next to 100...

*Pssst, if I lose it's because Feeble edited my verse and added a % sign!* :laugh:

You are a hoe .. lmao .. asking me to edit for you when you already could ..
*puts on mind theory warm up* *chokes on words* *gets verse chrit pm'd me out*

ya prewrite, got banned & ya gon be my bitch ,
& your a domestic animal, cuz you donkey ya shit ...
so how u winning this, while acting like a damn clown,
i won't give u a gentleman's greeting, i'd rather take this hand's down...
i'll take your Face-Off, the way that i drive pucks,
& clearly im coming be 4 you, cuz Phive sucks ...
I'm not trying, cuz im twice as good as this bastard is,
you'd only be above my verse, if you were that shit in asteriks ^
..getting banned stinks, like those ideas u smuggled & stained..
call this Clown a ball tossing circus act
...when I hit him in his Juggler Vein ..
& we know you post dope verses, that blew my steez,
so we've BEEN WAITING! ........ for you to leave. ..
aisle'll fog us out, put us behind the clouds & hoist ya up
... merk kids under the morning due then fucking moisture nuts...

Ok, votes now?

Mmmmm...

Gonna say Aisle took this.
Even though his "knife and fork" line is "plate" to death!
Oh my god, I'm funny!

Just thought his verse had tha better personal (deja vu)...
The wit was there (tightness on that "violence" line)...
And the closer was better.

Feeb's, I dunno, felt ya forced alot of ya shit.
Like ya opener, (donkey? wtf, I get it, but huh?)...
And that "clown/circus" shit...uh...not hard, man.
Ya closer was tight and complex, but I really thought Aisle's was more to the point and better for a closer.

Not a real close battle...
I guess Feebs was rushed or drunk or I dunno...

Cuz he rips shit and just didn't do it this time.

Peace

Vote: Aisle 5

Holla back on this right here!

Vote - Cereal Shelf

Feeble didnt try
Aisle pretended like he didn't, lmao
Phive wasn't great, but he was better than feebzie
Your both my e-homies so trust that
Aisle had a better verse and a dope closer

word nice verse aislely.
But i'll beat you at a later date.

Lol. My first half I had writers block and the second half I overcame it, w00t.

Aisle: Only good line... was the cereal boxes... that's was nice...

Feeb: good line... the juggler vein...



I know you can both come better... n' Feeb... think about it... you lost to Aisle... *shakes head*





I'm disappointed in both of you...


Verb...

You haven't seen me come my hardest, so that was uncalled for, keep those comments to yourself, thank you.

he sonned you though.. *remember i lost*
if you brag about this i'll call you out though. so dont. :)

win - aisley. pz