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SS: Hold On Tight
Change comes in time, it's an inevitable fact of life It causes so much agony, it leads to so much strife And if you wait long enough, change will happen, it's true But if you wait for change, it may not catch up to you Because people change, and you want them to change back overnight But you may be in for the fight of your life, you may want to hold on tight Life is never what it seems, lies are among us all Whether they deceive, or it's a bluff that you can easily call Secrets buried in the closet rarely get to be revealed People want to deal on their own, so secrets stay concealed Jackie was just like many, had troubles with her spouse Yells often echoed through the hollowed walls of the house Punches often flew, but all of them were at her But she held on tight, she was a better fighter 4 Months Later Cops were finally called in,they thought it was for the best Jackie never understood, it felt like a slug to her chest She cashed in her savings for him to be able to make bail And all the great things she did, seemed to be of no avail All he could see was that it was her fault, he hit her with a bottle of beer And if he had wanted to see who was really at fault, he just had to go to a mirror She stayed through the punches, and she lasted the night She was quite the fighter, she just held on tight Change She thought he could change, it was a matter of time "Things'll get better, and he'll be back to being mine" But beatings continues and court appearences would ensue But he always got bail, and Jackie let the cycle continue Til one time the fighting knocked her into submission If only Jackie's choices had gotten some revision And in the hospital, on life support she sits and continues her fight Not knowing what tomorrow will bring, not being able to hold on tight Change comes in time, it's an inevitable fact of life It causes so much agony, it leads to so much strife And if you wait long enough, change will happen, it's true But if you wait for change, it may not catch up to you Because people change, and you want them to change back overnight But you may be in for the fight of your life, you may want to hold on tight |
Matt I Am Your Father.
And I Am Proud. You Write Well. |
This was a good read...complex...to the point..good straight forward ideas...good vocab and very desriptive...great work...keep it up
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ok piece u need o flow a lil better..try not to strech so much
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I went for imagery instead of phrasing, thanks for the critique yall.
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