ghostie vs cutastraphe
 

i think i;s 10 line max
house rules
due in 45 min's
aight

yo i'm gonna say this
go over 10 its coo....
i may do more

peace

tops 10 mins for me.
check check yo.
upcheckup YO.

aight yo

you 0-3 that's a shame, i even got more losses
you aint even got a win yet, you kno wuts more worthless
i could use the force, but i don't need shit to dead you
and tell fantazee, you can't get that bitch to have sex with you
your a waste of trash, but still i'll throw you out
a ghostly image it takes one breath to blow you out
sorry to dissapoint, your bars are wut did it
so choppy and messed up, it looks like a sars exibit
u startin with the man, so be ready to book
cutastraphe ghost and my machete are hooked




aight dun
peace

lovein the college pussy, so it was a nice suprise u pre-med
ya words, a pre-cog against a 0-3 head thats already dead
said u didnt have time but howm i supposed to know when ur
constantly on invisible mode, too slow to comprehend my birds?
here have another,flipin more words then ggw camera and girls shirts
cut never had a full 10 so hes lost for anything close s unfamilliar turf
apparently as i tryed turnin the outcome on u, found ya face doom[peepavatar]
i cut him the face, ast him rap he? gushed red handed, rep ruined
Ghostie instill in mc my realness, be that a factor when you hearing sets of booing
im tryna book u in the system of the best, but found out ur just documental movies
makin u a docoumental history

yoooooooo lets get some votes!!!

uppin peepz leave a link i'll peep it

ghostie took dis straight up!!cutastraphe bit short dawg!bit longer verse frm u and bin a closer battle
VOTE:ghostie
Reture da fava

^learn how to vote, kidd. before droppin that pathetic excuse for a vote. anyways, uppin this for votes!!

you 0-3 that's a shame, i even got more losses
you aint even got a win yet, you kno wuts more worthless
Not a very strong opener, and losses and worthless didnt rhyme together
i could use the force, but i don't need shit to dead you
and tell fantazee, you can't get that bitch to have sex with you
Never did like it when the lines ended in the same word, punch wasnt that great
your a waste of trash, but still i'll throw you out
a ghostly image it takes one breath to blow you out
Decent punch, liked the 'ghostly image' play on
sorry to dissapoint, your bars are wut did it
so choppy and messed up, it looks like a sars exibit
You coulda made this a better punch if you changed up the 1st line, liked the idea
u startin with the man, so be ready to book
cutastraphe ghost and my machete are hooked
OK closer, nothing too fancy, but it works


lovein the college pussy, so it was a nice suprise u pre-med
ya words, a pre-cog against a 0-3 head thats already dead
Nice
said u didnt have time but howm i supposed to know when ur
constantly on invisible mode, too slow to comprehend my birds?
here have another,flipin more words then ggw camera and girls shirts
cut never had a full 10 so hes lost for anything close s unfamilliar turf
Didnt really care for the structure here, punches were shadowed by the poor structure
apparently as i tryed turnin the outcome on u, found ya face doom[peepavatar]
i cut him the face, ast him rap he? gushed red handed, rep ruined
I was lost here
Ghostie instill in mc my realness, be that a factor when you hearing sets of booing
im tryna book u in the system of the best, but found out ur just documental movies
makin u a docoumental history
This would have been a great ending punch, but in my opinion you should have tried to make just 2 lines and rhymed something with history or something...good idea, creative


Overall - Hard to decide on this one, so i looked at the mistakes and re-read it and decided that Ghostie got this one. Not by much, but he brought a lil more to the table. Vote: Ghostie .. peace

okay..a below average battle..

cut..your verse bar didnt rhyme that well..it was forced..punches wasnt at large in this battle. and it shows in your second bar..only bar I did like was the ghostly line..flow was decent..not too great..not too bad either..try to even up your lines a lil more..they dont have to be perfect..but,..that cant be all stretched..

ghostie..you put up a good battle..I was really expecting you to lose..which in my opinion you did..but let me explain why..your punches was..forced..all of them..it's like..that birds line..wtf do that mean?..I coulnt even comprehand your birds :huh: and that line that you tried to make with parts of his name in it made your verse worse..bar structure was better than Cut's..thats the only thing you beat him in..

my vote..Cut

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ht=dirtyendzone
hit that up^^

Alright, yo.. I think this wasn't too good on either side of the battle. I know you can both post verse much better then that. Cut.. i'm not seeing the creativity that I usually see in ur verse.. but u had some ok punches. Ghostie, I read ur verse 3 times, the third very slowly. I don't know man.. just wasn't working for me. In my mind, cut got u with better punches and pers. Just my opinion..

vote-cut

you 0-3 that's a shame, i even got more losses
you aint even got a win yet, you kno wuts more worthless
Weak opener, used filler
i could use the force, but i don't need shit to dead you
and tell fantazee, you can't get that bitch to have sex with you
Alright
your a waste of trash, but still i'll throw you out
a ghostly image it takes one breath to blow you out
Decent punch
sorry to dissapoint, your bars are wut did it
so choppy and messed up, it looks like a sars exibit
Rhymed choppy, but good concept
u startin with the man, so be ready to book
cutastraphe ghost and my machete are hooked
Decent closer


lovein the college pussy, so it was a nice suprise u pre-med
ya words, a pre-cog against a 0-3 head thats already dead
Garbage
said u didnt have time but howm i supposed to know when ur
constantly on invisible mode, too slow to comprehend my birds?
Wak
here have another,flipin more words then ggw camera and girls shirts
cut never had a full 10 so hes lost for anything close s unfamilliar turf
Flip some multis next time
apparently as i tryed turnin the outcome on u, found ya face doom[peepavatar]
i cut him the face, ast him rap he? gushed red handed, rep ruined
Decent personal
Ghostie instill in mc my realness, be that a factor when you hearing sets of booing
im tryna book u in the system of the best, but found out ur just documental movies
decent
Good job keeping it creative, but your other stuff was played

Vote - Cut

ghost won this >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>......................

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Token

SWING THAT'S NOT A VOTE. U HAVE TO BREAK IT DOWN DROP A VALID RESPONSE WHY HE WON. AND U POLLED THAT TOO U CRACK HEAD!!

anyways uppin. for some more votes

cutastraphe
you 0-3 that's a shame, i even got more losses
you aint even got a win yet, you kno wuts more worthless
didnt even ryhme? 3/10

i could use the force, but i don't need shit to dead you
and tell fantazee, you can't get that bitch to have sex with you
prety weak man, 4/10

your a waste of trash, but still i'll throw you out
a ghostly image it takes one breath to blow you out
nice play on his name, 6/10

sorry to dissapoint, your bars are wut did it
so choppy and messed up, it looks like a sars exibit
nice idea, bad wordplay, 5/10

u startin with the man, so be ready to book
cutastraphe ghost and my machete are hooked
bad closer, 4/10

pretty weak verse man, i know you can come harder than this

overall 22/50


ghostie
lovein the college pussy, so it was a nice suprise u pre-med
ya words, a pre-cog against a 0-3 head thats already dead
wasn't really feelin this, not too bad 5/10

said u didnt have time but howm i supposed to know when ur
constantly on invisible mode, too slow to comprehend my birds?
wtf, a wack non ryhming punch, 3/10

here have another,flipin more words then ggw camera and girls shirts
cut never had a full 10 so hes lost for anything close s unfamilliar turf
again pretty wack, 4/10

apparently as i tryed turnin the outcome on u, found ya face doom[peepavatar]
i cut him the face, ast him rap he? gushed red handed, rep ruined
played, i seen the doom punch before used on him, 5/10

Ghostie instill in mc my realness, be that a factor when you hearing sets of booing
im tryna book u in the system of the best, but found out ur just documental movies
why does most of your verse not ryhme, 3/10

make yor shit ryhme, comprhenable, an fix your structure.

overall 22/50


my vote cut