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MichaelCorleone vs DrinX
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aight i'm back here i go
I'm cold hearted assasin with these lyrics i'm blastin You tryin to rap battle but nigga in this thang you ain't lastin Call you self drinx but you a phony like kool-lite to kool-aid tha only thang you drink is nut when dicks in you mouth start to spray but aint' gotta say you gay for you to no you stands no chance against me I looked in ya profile in ya own hood nigga you has no history Niggas say you be spittin but that just be but the nut you throw up I might battle you again but like in ten years when you growup You never stood a chance like kids thats to young to walk Yo heard tha name corleone nigga now you outlined by chalk Murda |
come on its been like 20 minutes. i know i spit venom. but damn snap out of it. there will be other battles
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sry didnt see it ill drop now
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Bastard guess what, ur my Target, my array of raps will literally take out ur garbage im shitting on so many kids my verses come with their own rolls of charmin my style is vicious while ya rhymes layin in the dumps, i got no flaw u a pussy cause when it come to kombat ma words throw bullets like terry bradshaw my punches keep landing..until u bruised n have the worst face u'll always place 2nd..cuz u got no flow n cant rap in the first place Fuck ya Roots, even ifu got help from biggie ull never have this vet shook and as for this bitch,he aint eva gettin signed like stevie wonders check book ur catchn the end of my rath, u must feel crummy...pretty damn bad left this pussy bloody..hand him a tampon..cause he aint worthy of a PAD |
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damn rock the vote
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yo people.......start voten...u kno u want people to vote on your battles so start voten on mines...this is a nice battle to cmon people......
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this is ridiculous....
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Ok both verses were gud
flow:Michael punchlines:Drinx But in the end I must vote 4 Michael cuz he was a little bit better |
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This is just my opinion .....since I can't make it "official" vote
Mike's verse 's good points: multis, good structure, flow decent voab: Negative points: (work on these) just a suggestion (punchlines , multis, wordplay, vocab, ) tune it up Ironic your's is almost the opposite: good points: (flow, multis, decent meta, ) Iliked this line : "Fuck ya Roots, even ifu got help from biggie ull never have this vet shook and as for this bitch,he aint eva gettin signed like stevie wonders check book" Tho the one before was kinda basic.... Negative points: (structure, vocab, punchlines) tune em up I see POTENTIAL in BOTH keep rapping , writing , freestyilng I can't vote ...... (But if I could I'd have to say Drinx) Mike should dealt a harder blow being he has more experience that's the final reason why in my mind after reading both and compare all above^^^ But AGAIN I CAN'T VOTE so just looking out JamesJr. |
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To basic.. The outlined by chalk shit is so old Everyone has used that ... its wack Flow was decent, vocab was weak Structure was good..Punches were soft Personals were lacked.... overall....10/20 Quote:
Structure needs help Flow was good.. punches hit decently hard Vocab could use work, wordplay was good Personals were decent, could use work.. Somewhat creative... didnt use weak concepts Overall.. decent verse.... 14/20 V/DrinX |
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