TheUnderRated vs. Remixed Illusion
 

10-12
we got 30-45
blindspits
no/crew/hate/dr/gl
Checkin.....

check one, check one two, ready ta get merked.....

hahah aight man its all in fun....key in up.....................

Smokin bowl...

Battling tha Illusionist is one thing, but to beat me, u must be dreamin/
Your moms mouths like an ocean it contains so much seamen/
Learn from Pac's mistakes before ya gettin' smoked/
I wanted to get my dick wet but your moms left it soaked/
you scared, you don't like this raw hip hop sound/
you like men, but still you suck from the waist down/
i had a look at your mommas pussy, all i saw was hair/
Then i saw a big forest fire, and smokey the bear/
You saw some little guys, its sick that you malested 'em/
Your rhymes are so weak that your notepad rejected 'em/
Have you got a girlfirend? 'cause i don't intend to be mean/
But you spend half of your life infront of a computer screen/
You seem to scared man my rhymes are just too damn sick/
Only way you could Beat Me Down is if i was your dick/

You got served...

Kid must be catapaultin cows cause his punches just graze me...
U could be security on star trek and still never phase me....
Kids trying to spit sick...just pays homage to the greatest....
Cause he throws up Big L's at every engagment...
Kids got his gas mask on for a reason his rhymes are pollutin..
inhale all the canibus you want kid can't remix that illusion...
xtreme lyrical gangstaz didn't know they still exist.....
only place saw there names were on other Mc's merked list...
you shoulda listened to the saying if the shoes fits wear it..(avy)
look up^ kid admitted defeat......i didn't have to spit...
can't script well cause you drop your pens like horny men..
sad Kid thought he was gonna win..jus illusions again.....

you got served looks like it might be an intresting movie uppin this times one...peace leave links i'll do what i can...

Nice verse, lets get sum votes up on this, it gon b a close battle...Uppin 1

remixed illusion
Battling tha Illusionist is one thing, but to beat me, u must be dreamin/
Your moms mouths like an ocean it contains so much seamen/
not too bad, the seaman lines played

Learn from Pac's mistakes before ya gettin' smoked/
I wanted to get my dick wet but your moms left it soaked/
a pretty bad punch

you scared, you don't like this raw hip hop sound/
you like men, but still you suck from the waist down/
first line filler, gay jokes are played

i had a look at your mommas pussy, all i saw was hair/
Then i saw a big forest fire, and smokey the bear/
worst punch i've seen in days

You saw some little guys, its sick that you malested 'em/
Your rhymes are so weak that your notepad rejected 'em/
second line could of been made ok, weakly worder

Have you got a girlfirend? 'cause i don't intend to be mean/
But you spend half of your life infront of a computer screen/
played, all of it i heard before

You seem to scared man my rhymes are just too damn sick/
Only way you could Beat Me Down is if i was your dick/
was funny, when it was first used back in the old days

you came played to death, every bar had a sex/gay pun in them.
no personals what-so-ever, no real hard hitting punches,
the wordplay was good, but then your concepts were all bout gay/sex,



the UndeRated
Kid must be catapaultin cows cause his punches just graze me...
U could be security on star trek and still never phase me....
not too bad, could of been worded better

Kids trying to spit sick...just pays homage to the greatest....
Cause he throws up Big L's at every engagment...
i wasn't feeling this

Kids got his gas mask on for a reason his rhymes are pollutin..
inhale all the canibus you want kid can't remix that illusion...
lol, second line, was pretty funny

xtreme lyrical gangstaz didn't know they still exist.....
only place saw there names were on other Mc's merked list...
ohhhh nice punch, an personal

you shoulda listened to the saying if the shoes fits wear it..(avy)
look up^ kid admitted defeat......i didn't have to spit...
filler

can't script well cause you drop your pens like horny men..
sad Kid thought he was gonna win..jus illusions again.....
aiight, the nameplay is probs played


you had slightly better wordplay, a nice hard hitting personal, an some ok punches,
nothing spectacular!!

bote the underated
better verse, harder punches!!

Battling tha Illusionist is one thing, but to beat me, u must be dreamin/
Your moms mouths like an ocean it contains so much seamen/
weak opener..kinda played
Learn from Pac's mistakes before ya gettin' smoked/
I wanted to get my dick wet but your moms left it soaked/
decent flow but sex personals and shit are played
you scared, you don't like this raw hip hop sound/
you like men, but still you suck from the waist down/
better....this line was okay..too much filler though
i had a look at your mommas pussy, all i saw was hair/
Then i saw a big forest fire, and smokey the bear/
nope...more sex talk
You saw some little guys, its sick that you malested 'em/
Your rhymes are so weak that your notepad rejected 'em/
1st line wack...2nd line was pretty good
Have you got a girlfirend? 'cause i don't intend to be mean/
But you spend half of your life infront of a computer screen/
2nd line was okay....a lot of filler....
You seem to scared man my rhymes are just too damn sick/
Only way you could Beat Me Down is if i was your dick/
okay closer.....overall verse was a little on the weak side, nice flow and structure but hardly any real punches or personals....


Kid must be catapaultin cows cause his punches just graze me...
U could be security on star trek and still never phase me....
good opener....nice punches had me laughin
Kids trying to spit sick...just pays homage to the greatest....
Cause he throws up Big L's at every engagment...
another decent punch....
Kids got his gas mask on for a reason his rhymes are pollutin..
inhale all the canibus you want kid can't remix that illusion...
nice play off of his name........
xtreme lyrical gangstaz didn't know they still exist.....
only place saw there names were on other Mc's merked list...
not bad...could've been worded better but still effective personal
you shoulda listened to the saying if the shoes fits wear it..(avy)
look up^ kid admitted defeat......i didn't have to spit...
okay..too much filler..................
can't script well cause you drop your pens like horny men..
sad Kid thought he was gonna win..jus illusions again.....
okay closer.....your verse was a little weak around the end but the opener and most of the verse were good.....creative punces and personals.....

overall:Underrated

return the favor and vote on the battles in my sig........

This goes to The underrated for the simple fact that illusionz used to many lines to get the point across that he felt underratted is homosexual.

uppin this for some more poll votes its only got one so far lets get it closed y'all

uppin this one times 3 also i would vote on your battles if i saw them/ had a link left

punches under: Kid must be catapaultin cows cause his punches just graze me...
U could be security on star trek and still never phase me....
metas under:Cause he throws up Big L's at every engagment...
Kids got his gas mask on for a reason his rhymes are pollutin..
personals under:you shoulda listened to the saying if the shoes fits wear it..(avy)
look up^ kid admitted defeat......i didn't have to spit...
flow under: both had good flow but unders wasnt stretched
overall under: i gotta go with under for better verse

vote on mine please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110386

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom

Battling tha Illusionist is one thing, but to beat me, u must be dreamin/
Your moms mouths like an ocean it contains so much seamen/
5/10

Learn from Pac's mistakes before ya gettin' smoked/
I wanted to get my dick wet but your moms left it soaked/
ummm no 3/10

you scared, you don't like this raw hip hop sound/
you like men, but still you suck from the waist down/
okay but didnt rhyme....4/10

i had a look at your mommas pussy, all i saw was hair/
Then i saw a big forest fire, and smokey the bear/
lmao but no 5/10

You saw some little guys, its sick that you malested 'em/
Your rhymes are so weak that your notepad rejected 'em/
1/10

Have you got a girlfirend? 'cause i don't intend to be mean/
But you spend half of your life infront of a computer screen/
not felling it 0/10

You seem to scared man my rhymes are just too damn sick/
Only way you could Beat Me Down is if i was your dick/
only nice one you had 9/10 second part is good



Kid must be catapaultin cows cause his punches just graze me...
U could be security on star trek and still never phase me....
aight 6/10

Kids trying to spit sick...just pays homage to the greatest....
Cause he throws up Big L's at every engagment...
second is good 7/10

Kids got his gas mask on for a reason his rhymes are pollutin..
inhale all the canibus you want kid can't remix that illusion...
good 8/10

xtreme lyrical gangstaz didn't know they still exist.....
only place saw there names were on other Mc's merked list...
aight 7/10

you shoulda listened to the saying if the shoes fits wear it..(avy)
look up^ kid admitted defeat......i didn't have to spit...
aight 5/10

can't script well cause you drop your pens like horny men..
sad Kid thought he was gonna win..jus illusions again.....
aight closer 7/10

overall under again

post in ir since i explained my vote cause i cant poll