Drugs... (short)
 

Yo, one, two... What you do will come back too you....

Let me break this down into a better prespective..
your ass is leaking, like a junkies arm being injected...
reflected images of your life, swallowed whole...
rapping was ya main aim, better yet your goal...
actin tough, looking rough actin' like a bitch...
your ass is soo tough, that you got flipped...
you never made it rich, you was a begga's slave...
two more years of these drugs, n yo'w ass will be in a grave...

You just can't do it, or let it be, 'This isn't worth it'...................
your arms fucked up, it's been jabbed too many times, your in orbit
fuck holding onto me, your ass deserves shit...
the bacterial liquid you inject, is what gangsta's inflict
too many chances for you, now you lose it....
you were my homie couz, but you abused it....

Pussy come n then it went........

Yo, yo....

too many bitches actin like thugs....
too many pussies taking drugs....
inflictin the crisis is more than near....
slowly ya life will disintergrate n dissapear...

Drugs y'all... y'all aint bad, thugs, gansta's.. You cowards looking for a way out... Fuck drugs, i get my kicks outta life n all positive shit.. Pussies. :nono:

not too bad..once again a played out topic,and you didn't carry it that well but,you had a decent flow going..peace..

Topic too played, too short, vocab was pretty good at times but not consistent if you gave this some proofreadin, extended it, etc. it could be way better. And I am a druggie, but that's not biasing my critique. 5/10

rhymes was aiite but topic was stupid

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