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CarsonJet -v- FairInHeight
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aight yo i'm checking in
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FairInHeight...
What the Fah?...Fair.. your strait pathetic Your a waste of credits,Some one call a Paramedic... Yeh I said it...Fairy, Your days are number'd Low in fahrenheit even witta verse dats sun'burn'd... You can spit them retarded sig riddle's all day, Da fuck I care, I aint got nuttin gainst Gays I flo wit hetero's jus like homo's they all the same 99% aint got game,But that's OK... Only dynasty's soldiers is left to blame Congrat's tho...U made me key up a whole 5 minutes... Same amount of time that this gon take u to the Clinique |
he says he jet, thinks his body's darkened, theres no such thing as black johnny carson/
tries being tactical and rocket launchin, but the problem's the rocket's launched from bostom/ so you're straight out the boondocks eh, well messin wit t.o. that's just upid-stay/ well say anything, all that you can say, still you cheat the rap game for quadroople a's/ he plays heh ya still he's an outer-cast, won't get applause teaching infants how to clap / tried makin words rhyme, n rewound em fast, cuz u can't sound a rap, if you pound on glass/ so why'd you challenge me, i be the realest, hes totally fake yo hes just cheese wiz/ neglected in chatroom's an ebay reject, the only t-dot mc you beat's named t-west/ (t-west is his first challenger ever who's from toronto) why you battlin me, lowerin your pride states, i 'm called FairInHeight, ur votes inclined mate/ you best just give up get your vibes, straight a kid name jet just got merked by a flyweight/ |
i meant to say decline at the end sorry uppin
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first off, fair change ur structure. no spaces in between bars. breakdown:
punches - jet: urs were better than fair, easily said... flow - jet: went all together, nice job, fairs went off... multis - jet: fair didnt have any... personals - tie: both had mad personals... structure - jet: easily won, change ur structure... nice job jet and fair, but carson took this one... vote - carsonjetx2 return da favor: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111066 |
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1. Fake Personal's (t-west one) 2. 20 lines 4 lines in each bar 3. I don't care tho.....lol |
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carsonjetX2
you had a nice compact verse, with good punches in thier, wordplay was nice, an some good multies combined with a few personals! best bar Quote:
Fairnheight struture was off, you seemed to be goin for more multies than punches, they hardly hit, some attempts at wordplay! no quoteables!! vote carson better verse, harder hitting punches, a easy win plz drop an honest vote on that http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111180 |
punches cj: Da fuck I care, I aint got nuttin gainst Gays
I flo wit hetero's jus like homo's they all the same metas cj: What the Fah?...Fair.. your strait pathetic Your a waste of credits,Some one call a Paramedic.. (kinda) paersonals cj: Yeh I said it...Fairy, Your days are number'd Low in fahrenheit even witta verse dats sun'burn'd... peep mine please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110386 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom |
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I have to drop this to Carson. He had his shit together. I would vote if I could.
Carson you gave your view on mine, but you didn't vote. holla back. |
Carson...ur verse flowed nicely...but some of the rhymes were really weak..but then again u prolly didn't spend much time on it...
Fair In Height...all you needed was like..2 good punches in that verse and a better structure and you would have it dude....ur rhymes are good, n ur vocab is decent..but you just gotta fix some of ur shit...ur structure is horrible too.. vote- Carson Jet http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=107780&page=2 ^ battle with Village Pimp..needs votes.. |
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