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BATTLE: Rappin' master v potent
ill spit first. CCCHHHEEECCCHHHIIINNN' IIINNN
agreed with da rulz |
ight i'm checkin in 2...... go head and drop and i'll drop afta u.....
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ur raps are bad as ur mumma's minge, everytime you open ur mouth u squek like an old croacked door hinge//
dont speak to me, ur voice hasn't broken, and until it has im the one who has spoken// the only way u can get high, is to bully little brats, but the other night it was the other way round, it was u who was recieving all the smacks,// this guys is so new to R 'n' B, and he looks as guilty as the BBC, wen im standin in trial of the murder u, u little pussy, no1 will care cos it wont be a calamity,// ur a wannabe rapper who needs to wake up from ur dreams, wen ud dying in ur sleep, no1 win hear ur screams,// my raps are like the gensis the bible, im god and ur da devil, so u aint liable,// at rappin i am the god, ur whole rhyme is bout to subside, cos wen Jesus walked on water, i beat him to the other side// |
i'll crush ya trash like compactors,murder this rap actor//
its like you spittin in sign language cuz ya words aint a factor// verbs will attack ya crack ya like chiropractor patients// i'll put ya lips on railroads so you can try an re track ya statements// flamin fists enter abdomens and he starts grabbin his organs// I stay killin new-bees like yellow jackets havin abortions// lead prone i check domes, be sure to keep ya head strong// think you betta kill you incorrectly ta prove ya dead wrong// put make up on ur bruised face lookin like cosmetic braids// yeah ur probabbly negative on flows but positive on the aids// |
rappin' master took dis straight up.both gud puches but master hit harder.master beta alround.
VOTE:rappin master return favour!!plz |
Rap Master Are You serious that so called verse was garbage. People please stop using these long ass words that you cant even spell tryna come off as smart or something.
Overall: This battle was wack My vote goes for Potent because of Rappin Masters complete lack of ability. |
some wicked lines from both..
but best over all was potent with the ability to confuse- if this battle was on a stage and potent was first id like to ov seen rappin master's come back.. Vote : Potent ----------------Ekklipse Vs ReMiXx-------------- http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...202#post1145202 |
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ite ite......potent got dis eazily.....
punches: potent- hard thrown....on da point......but weak.....rm- urz waz wak......no offence flow: potent- nice rhythm.....eazier 2 read...rm- ur waz not on da point.....weak.....werk on nit structure: potent.........rm- wtf waz dattttt............. vote: potent...i think ^^these 3 r da most important so mah vote goez 2 potent.... even if u cant vote hit dis battle up......opinion... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111358 |
ite this wasnt nethin special..i guess,
your both new here....potent your verse was ok.. nice attempt..punches were ok but get some wordplay in there, also try and through some personals in man..not to bad tho your structure was coo but take the"/"'s of the end its newbish man, r-m-not to good your shit was streched like mad, improve your structure peep sme gd battles in elavated, work on punches also and flow lacked, v-potent, plz hit this now http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109550 thx..............pz |
i poll voted.....now plze hit mah battle up.....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111358 if u cant vote.......give ya opinionnnn........1 |
^werd http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109550 .............thx....pz
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Potent takes this, it's clear you're new though man, try taking off the // for starters and also clean up the structure or bit. You have it where it counts though, witty punches and good flow took this battle for Potent. Try to throw personals more often because if you don't you might as well be battling anybody instead of your opponent, personals hit hard. Keep elevating, good luck. Other cat, same thing goes for you but you *really* need to fix your structure and lose the //, also try to think of more original punches.
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