My introduction
 

SSSSSSSSSStop........
Hmmm..

Oh, yea now I remember
I can't rap cause I look like John Denver
I'm perma-white like an Alaskan december
but the forshadowing of raps biggest contender
Ring the bell It's the last round for Mc's
who test their skills against these
Please, believe I don't mean to hurt you
but your new name is sandy brownie
cause in the desert I'll dessert you
get it, that's a joke if you missed it

i'm a newbie too and this is my first post and, it would be better if you fixed the end of ur intro, otherwise its cool

sleept on
 

Well you got slept on so I give you an quick honest opinion



First yeah I agree with need a (better) intro:

I dunno really, HONESTLY brutally

You need to up it all and read some tutorials on this site
You had some decent multies



JamesJr.


Like I said