PROOF-VS-LyRiCaLArRsOnIsT
 

ok
10 lines
no feedin
no dick riding
no crew votes
no tryin to sway votes
proof spit first

checkin in, how much time do i get, id like a lil time cause i just spit 10 lines in six minutes, u should check it out.

Ok Good Point Blind Spit Ok I Guesse 5 Mins Lets Make Dis Quick
5lines Beter This Is A Newb Batle

hey arsonist, pardon this, but ill be startin shit/
ill be whippin out my dick, its ur job to harden it/
but it is my job to make you as loose as shit/
shove my cock in you and bruise ur clit/
ur probly readin this with a vibrator to ur pussy/
just come on to denver, im look for some nookie/
catch a plane from vegas/
and please dont say shit/
i dont need ur fuckin mom comin along/
unless shes hot, but tell me if im wrong/

hey arsonist, check out vote for my diss agains missing page

I Know Im A Rookie But I Aint Soft As A Cookie//
Ya Girl Real Nice She Gave Me Da Nookie//
She Waz A Hookie(hooker)who Tried To Sell Cookies//
In Denver But Those Bronz Hoes(brocos)clok Ya Ho's No Nose//
But Who Nose Wat Happen To Ya Ass Hole Behind Da Doh//
Maybe It Waz Rape By And Ape I Got Da Proof I Found He Pubes On Da Roof//
Plus The Apes Dick Nock Out Ya Front Tooth//

hey sorry about the ten lines, i started writing be4 i read ur 5 line thing

uppin for votes

does nobody hit up my battles because they know i cant vote back for them yet?

proof dont upp this battle more than 5 time uve used 4 of them and i wud say proof took it as lyrical however u spell it was wack and spat less than the minimum 10 lines...........lyrical imma battle u so go set it up and spit

proof took this but u guys its a 10 line minimun

dont need to say anything.. lyrical spat under 10 lines so proof gets vote by default.. read rules before u ever battle..

vote - proof via disregard of rules

weeakkkkkk battle..........but proof took dis eazily with a lil' punhces....but wak flow ......
lyrical- no offense but eleveate dawg.........elevate.......
breakdown:
punches: proof........lyrical u have to work on that man......ur punches were off
flow: proof........lyrical- ur flow waz everywhere......stik 2 one topic n stay hard on it
strucutre: proof........lyrical- itz 10 line minimum.....u have 2 rite ATLEAST 10 linez.....
vote: proof.........i think that these are the 3 most important things........
n proof.......u shuldnt of accepted da battle wit lethal....u gonna lose.......but u will elevate tho........good luck!

i already did, and i spit already

PROOF took this 1 with ease........
and PROOF dnt say anything else in this thread because it will be an upp.
also ask a MOD to give you the win because LyRiCaLArRsOnIst is banned....
thats all i have to say.....
VoTe, PROOF..........